Interview With Branli Caidryn

Branli Caidryn is a camera shy aspiring author, Science Fiction junkie, and social nomad extraordinaire; all while trying to find his place in this world.  Having recently finished writing Project Horizon: Overture, he will soon enter the world of querying.

1.       At what point did you decide you were a “writer”, and not just a (fill in your day job here)?

I think it started when I began my second book. Originally, on my first book, I wrote to pass the time. Sure, there were ideas and stories in my head brewing, but I never expected to really finish. It was something I refer to as ‘dabbling.’

Once I started on the second book I realized I needed to take writing more seriously and shortly thereafter considered myself a writer.

2.       What is the first task you accomplished towards the goal of being a published author?

Read more.

Seriously. I realized early on that in order to hone my skills I needed to study the craft. What better way than to read how others do it?

I also began attending a few writer workshops hosted by published authors and others in the publishing industry.

3.       Do you have a blog?  How do you use it?

I do. It helps me keep thoughts organized, a way to look back and see how far I’ve come. It’s primarily there to document my journey towards publication.

4.       Do you use twitter, facebook, Goodreads, or  other social media sites?

Twitter is really what started it all for me. It allowed me to spring-board my knowledge on writing and getting published. Facebook has also brought the twitter social circle in a more refined way, allowing me to more easily interact with authors, screenwriters, and even a few intern agents.

5.       Do you have multiple accounts on any of the sites?  Do you combine the personal and private or keep them separate?

I certainly have multiple accounts on twitter. One is my writer, one is very personal, and the last is dedicated to my book. I think it’s essential to keep things separate. For example, though I have a decent amount of followers on my primary account (mostly writers), I wouldn’t consider them a platform when I go to sell my book. That’s what the book account is for.

6.       How important was it to you, personally, to establish a web presence as a pre-published writer?

This is sort of a double-edge sword. I have to be careful with what sort of image I’m setting up. On the one hand I’ve gotten to know many authors and even a few agents. On the other I often worry about the image I portray, worrying about my WIP, edits, or even complaining about work. Oy!

7.       Many writers go through a stage when they hate the words they are writing.  Is this true for you?  How do you get through it?

Ha! All the time!

I come to loathe the project I’m working on and feel like abandoning it. I must admit I did this often in my earlier attempts at writing. I think it’s important to know when to take a step back, take some time off, or even move on to another project.

8.       What is your favorite electronic or digital tool to use for writing?

My absolute favorite is Liquid Story Binder XE by Black Obelisk. I can create the most thorough character dossiers, outlines, and even timelines. I must admit that it’s an unfortunate underuse of the program as it has many more features, but it serves my needs. Creating worlds has never been easier for me.

9.       What is your favorite non-electronic writing aide?

The ocean. It is the perfect blank canvas. I could stare at it for hours playing out a scene or story in my head.

10.   What is the most persistent distraction from writing?

That would be twitter, though anything that connects me to the Internet is bound to distract me. I end up doing the social-media shuffle, from one outlet to another, somehow expecting things to change or see an update/notification.

11.   What is your ideal writing environment?  Have you been able to create it?

I’ve tried many different settings and have yet to find my ideal writing environment. I think it all depends on the mood and what exactly I’m doing. For example, when creating a first draft, I like music and perhaps a nice view. For editing, I require no music, absolute silence, and preferably a dark room with no windows.

12.   Have you researched agents, or contacted any regarding representation?

I’ve yet to reach out to any at this point. Now that I’ve finished some final edits, I’ve only just started researching agents and publishers. The next step will be queries.

An attempt at communicating with the mother ship? Or notes on the next novel?

13.   What have you learned about querying?

N/A

14.   At what point would you consider yourself to be “a success” as a writer?  At what point would you quit your day job?

I used to think that landing a contract and selling my first book would be considered success, not so much anymore. It seems that’s only step one in a long race with not only other authors but the long career ahead.

I would quit my job once the royalty checks come in and could keep me afloat.

15.   How much writing did you do before deciding that you were “officially” a writer?

245k words… I finished a trilogy before I realized I wasn’t in it just for fun.

16.   On your blog you mention a previous work that is either 2 or 6 books, depending on who you ask.  Are these works that you plan to return to, or are they the “First Books You Hide in a Drawer Never to See the Light of Day” that so many writers have?

Ha! The 245k word project is technically a sequel, and though planned as one big book is now edited into three separate books, creating a trilogy.

The first book, now THAT is the book I hide in a drawer to never see the light of day!

17.   What shifted when you switched from these books to your WIP?

The mindset behind my work has certainly shifted. As I write I’m more aware of the world I’m about to create, watching for story arcs, plot holes, and character development. I think I will have less work on my hands when I edit this current WIP.

18.   Did you create a world for your WIP?  How extensively did you work out the details of this world?

The details I think went a bit far than on prior works. I went all the way down to the politics, laws, and even started working on a sort of constitution. I studied social structures from different cultures and added that to my world. I also thought about environment, thinking about what fauna and flora would exist and why. Even the terrain was studied a bit, charting where deserts or forests would exist. Pretty heavy on detail with hopes it pays off in the end.

19.   What else can you share about your WIP?

It’s exciting. Working on anything new is exciting and it’s a challenge as a writer to see if you can out-do yourself.

20.   When the day comes that you are presented with a prestigious award, who are you most likely to forget to thank?

I honestly have such a bad memory, and my friends can attest to it, that I’ll be sure to sum the thanks with a simple, “and I’d like to thank all my friends.”

Best wishes to Mission: STS-134 and the crew of the Shuttle Endeavor, launching today!

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M.A.S.H.

M.A.S.H. was one of the most unforgettable television shows in history. Its svelte combination of stark drama and snarky humor stands unrivaled before or after.

I want to write M.A.S.H.  It’s not that I want to write about a mobile army surgical hospital, or anything vaguely medical-ish at all! I get queasy trying to make it through an episode of Grey’s Anatomy. I’m not a military writer either, although it is not uncommon for my characters to have some kind of military background.

What I want is the seamless blend of drama and humor that forced us as a viewing audience to define the term dramedy. My characters can be very real to me, and in order to be just as real to my audience, they must have the multiple facets that real humans have. We laugh. We cry. Sometimes we laugh at funerals and cry at surprise parties.

I think I have a good sense of humor, but it is very opportunistic. I can’t resist a straight line, and it’s got me in trouble more than once. (If you follow Tiffany Reisz on twitter, she will feed you plenty of straight lines!) I love it when I find the humor creeping into my stories, but I can’t write it on demand like Robert Asprin.  I myth him.

I have trouble letting anything bad happen to my characters (unlike Jane Kindred, who loves to torture hers!) But I do have good plots that include drama and tension. The trick is getting it out onto the page before I wimp out and say “Oh, but everyone was all right!”

I’ve reached about 8,000 words in my WIP, with the working title Mama Mia. (On a side note, I really need to come up with a better title soon.) I know the entire plot, although the romance side will have to come along as I write. I think I will be able to surge through and get this ready for querying in a month. That may seem like an impossible task, but it is worth it. I’ve spent the past six months immersed in this world, writing and revising it, and figuring out what ties the stories together and what separates them.  I do not want to write a series where a reader will be completely lost if they pick up a book in the middle, but I want to reward loyal readers who start from the beginning and stick with me. I don’t know if an agent would tsk at me if they found out that I was querying a book I’d only begun a couple months before. I hope not. I hope that the fact that this world has been at the forefront of my imagination for several years now will come through in the finished product, even if it only gets a once through with my proofreader and a once over edit from me. I’d rather have the agent’s input before editing further, to be honest.

On another note, the next two interviews I have lined up are a bit different. Both are pre-published writers, one of whom is about to query, and one of whom just signed with an agent. I like the idea of getting some diversity into these interviews, from writers like Rhiannon Ellis and Sara Creasy who are doing virtual tours for their works that just came out, to writers at every stage in their career. 

And, if I’ve played my cards right, I might have lined up my first non-human interview! But more on that later…

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Precious Time

While interviewing Rhiannon Ellis, I was impressed with her ability to refocus amidst the chaos of small children and write in the moments grabbed here and there.

As I write this, my own three year old (also named Rhiannan, but spelled one letter differently) is taking stickers off my arm and putting them onto herself. I stopped typing while she did so. Who knows what nonsense would end up in this post if I split my attention like that?

Two things happened today that will greatly affect my time in the near future.  First, I completed a proofreading exam and may soon be proofreading M/M erotic romance for a publishing house.  I don’t get paid, but I get experience, discounts, and a few other privileges.  The second thing that happened is that my first choice (and hopefully only choice) agent is doing a webinar next month on querying!  This is a chance for me to not only send her a query, but guarentee that she will read it and give me feedback.  But the trick is, I’ve decided that the WIP is going to be the queried book… not the three that I’ve already finished in rough draft form!

But all is not lost.  I have the ability in me to churn out the necessary words. I have the story in me, and I’ve been frustrated at the lack of time for NOT doing laundry, and doing what I love most… writing.

I’ve set a new goal.  Write the thing in the next couple of weeks.  Beg Geri to proofread it for me, even if I have to promise to dedicate the whole darn thing to her if it ever sees the light of day!  (Or perhaps I will just give her my firstborn child… I always thought her youngest and my oldest made a cute couple!) And then edit, all in less than a month so I’ll be ready to send a well prepared query that represents a well thought out novel.

Wish me luck.

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Interview with Rhiannon Ellis

Rhiannon Ellis is a writer of romance, paranormal romance and mainstream fiction. She is a voracious reader and researcher. Her debut novel Bonded in Brazil was released in March of 2011 from Camel Press.  Her novella Dark Wolf Protector was also released in March of 2011, from Cobblestone Press.  She is represented by literary agent Dawn Dowdle of the Blue Ridge Literary Agency.  Rhiannon lives in Wisconsin with her husband and kids, where she continues to write amidst the chaos and interruptions that come with having small children.

1.       Apparently your parents loved the Fleetwood Mac song “Rhiannon” as much as I do, since we both named daughters after it!  Do you like the song?  Or are you sick of it by now?

Yes, my parents loved the song and so do I. Then again, who can resist Stevie Nicks? I’d never get tired of listening to her unique voice or the songs of Fleetwood Mac. I do, however, get a little embarrassed when strangers sing the chorus of “Rhiannon” to me. I think they expect me to join in, lol.

2.       How much writing did you do before having not just one, but two book contracts?  Do you have any “First novels” stuck in the back of a drawer that will never see the light of day?

The two books I have published now are my 2nd and 3rd written. I wrote a “First” novel that did get agented but was ultimately never published. I trunked it but have recently decided to dust it off and start from scratch. I always believed there was something special about this story. It took me two and a half years after writing it to figure what that was, though.

I’m going through an interesting (to me) process of reworking the book now. I’m using the same characters and setting, but the plot is new. The old plot is being used as backstory. Of course my writing style has changed quite a bit—and improved!—so I must rewrite everything, even tidbits that I’m keeping from the old manuscript.

This book is like revisiting an old lover that I haven’t seen in years. There’s comfort and immediate intimacy, but it’s new again. The rediscovery has been meaningful for me…like falling in love all over again.

3.       Bonded in Brazil and Dark Wolf Protector both came out in March of this year.  How did it come about that you had two works come out from different publishers in the same month?

Ha! Dumb luck. Bonded In Brazil was contracted through Camel Press in November. My March release date was set shortly after that. I queried Cobblestone Press with Dark Wolf Protector, a paranormal novella, the week of Christmas. I got an offer a week later, on New Year’s Day. Their publishing schedule allows for 2-3 books a week, and it just so happened that DWP’s release landed exactly 7 days before BIB’s.

Double promo is—excuse my language—a bitch. 🙂

4.       Congratulations on the contract for the sequel!  How quickly did that happen?

Can you tell I’m a writing machine? Don’t worry. I get plenty of rest…I simply skip laundry.

I finished the sequel to Bonded In Brazil in February (I think) and sent it off to my agent. She responded rather quickly with a contract for representation. That’s the beauty of already having an agent—the speediness of the process increases exponentially.

I have, however, been through Query Hell before when submitting my first novel. Six months and a stack of form rejections later, I landed an agent.

5.       How did you find your agent?

Probably like anyone else. I searched online, used many of the agent tracking sites available. I researched each one to make sure they were legit and not scam artists. Then I shot off emails and letters and hoped for the best.

6.       I’ve seen a few videos that were made to promote a book, called “book trailers”.  How did that come about in your case?

Books trailers are just another avenue to promote your work. Authors should take advantage of any opportunity to get their work and name out there. Books trailers are pretty nifty because a) they’re fun to make and b) they can be uploaded to YouTube, one of the biggest search engines available.

7.       The VLog you filmed was so adorable!  How can you work at all with such adorable distractions?

Ha! Thanks. The Vlog didn’t go as planned, but that’s motherhood for you. There’s always a surprise or change in plans.

To answer your question…I have no idea how I get anything done in this house. I do know something about myself and it is this: If I want something badly enough, I will get it. I’m not the type of person most people would describe as driven upon first meeting me because I’m not especially assertive or vocal about my dreams. I describe myself as quietly ambitious and unbending in my personal goals. I’m pretty sure it’s this mindset that forces me to get writing done amidst the chaos that is a 5 year old and a 2 year old.

8.       What is your ideal writing environment?  For example, do you prefer silence or background noise?

I don’t mind background noise at all. I do mind fighting, tantrums and incessant interruptions, which seem unavoidable most days.

9.       Have you ever actually been able to experience the perfect writing environment?

Nope. 🙂

10.   You mentioned in a previous interview that you sometimes move back and forth between manuscripts.  What is your limit when it comes to multitasking?

Usually two works in progress. Sometimes just one. I like having a little side project, like a novella, to give me a small break from my main work when I’m feeling burned out. It’s also nice change of scenery to be working on a contemporary romance and flip over to a paranormal romance.

11.   Do you have your own set of rules to follow for how steamy a love scene can be?  Are these rules influenced by publishers?

I stick to detailed sensual love scenes because that’s what feels natural to me. I also feel that it works with my writing style as opposed to explicit sex. I’ve never written a love scene that was targeted toward a publisher’s demands, although I’d have nothing against doing that if it’s required of me in the future.

In Dark Wolf Protector, for example, I think the lack of C words and the P word might’ve been all that kept it from being categorized as “erotic romance.” I could be wrong, though. Cobblestone, at the time of my submission, wanted “erotic romance” or “erotica.” I submitted DWP, got a contract and assumed that meant mine was “erotic romance.” However, they’ve since changed their guidelines and are accepting “sensual” heat levels, which is how they categorized DWP.

And here I’d thought I’d written smut. Darn!

12.   What was your editing process for each book?  How many people were involved?  Was it different for the novel and the novella?

Bonded In Brazil was in a writer’s group, which helped me a great deal. DWP I edited on my own, with no outside help. My recently agent-contracted book was looked over by a few trusted and phenomenal betas.

*shrug*

I guess I’m an editing flake.

13.   Were any changes suggested to you during this process that you were reluctant to make?

I had an extremely thorough editor for Bonded In Brazil, which the book probably needed since it was my first ever romance. She suggested lots of tweaks but no major rewrites. The “tweaks” however killed some of my babies, so I experienced some reluctance and irritation briefly.

Then, I told myself to get over it and moved on.

14.   Many writers say they go through a stage when they hate what they’ve written.  Did you ever feel that way about your work?  If so, how did you get through it?

Oh, yes. I battle this constantly, mostly because I read my work with a critical eye until it’s done. Really done. Only then can I read and enjoy. Some people would go nuts with this mindset, but I need it to make me a better editor. Turn a negative into a positive, right?

15.   In what ways do you use social media with regards to your writing?

I love social media! I use it mostly to promote my blog, which focuses on writing and publishing. Blogger, Twitter, Facebook, LinkedIn, YouTube, various forums and groups…all a lot of fun and full of people with whom authors can connect.

16.   What is your favorite electronic or digital tool to use for writing?

Obviously, my computer ranks #1. I also love using my Kindle! Once I’ve edited the brains out of my manuscript, I’ll send it to my Kindle for reading. This format allows me to pick up on things I would’ve otherwise missed when reading off my computer screen.

17.   What is your favorite non-electronic writing aide?

Do those exist? Umm…Play-Doh. It keeps my kids busy for a couple of hours when I need it the most.

18.   For any readers who have finished writing their first complete romance novel, and are thinking about publishing, what would you say is the next critical step?

If they’ve finished editing, the next step is to write the very best query money can buy, send it out, and get to work on their next project. The next book is essential. That way, if nothing happens with the first, there’s something to fall back on.

I think a lot of authors make the mistake of putting all their eggs into their first-book basket. Nothing happens and they never write again. That’s just sad, and I’d bet we’ve missed out on tons of wonderful writers because of this.

19.   What’s one question you wish someone had asked you in this whole round of interviews that no one has asked yet?

No one’s asked if they could do my laundry and housework for me. I’d like it if someone did.

 20.   When the day comes that you are presented with a prestigious award, who are you most likely to forget to thank?

My husband and children, first. They’re my everything and I doubt I could write books about love without having loved and been loved by these remarkable people.

Also, my mom, who homeschooled me and beat me with books until I learned to love them.

Rhiannon has been busy touring blogs and promoting her books!  To learn more, see these links for other interviews and guest posts:

INTERVIEWS

http://kiennariley.blogspot.com/2011/04/author-spotlight-rhiannon-ellis.html?zx=3dab0cb56d3b87f2

http://vintagevonnie.blogspot.com/2011/03/rhiannon-ellis.html

http://lizzietleaf.blogspot.com/2011/03/rhiannon-ellis-shares.html

http://thewriteoneval.blogspot.com/2011/03/welcome-author-rhiannon-ellis.html

http://worldsunimagined.blogspot.com/2011/03/behind-curtain-with-rhiannon-ellis.html

http://makingbabygrand.com/2011/02/22/meet-author-rhiannon-ellis/

http://anneholly.blogspot.com/2010/12/interview-with-rhiannon-ellis.html

http://elaina-lee.blogspot.com/2010/12/interview-with-rhiannon-ellis.html

GUEST BLOGS

http://www.bookwenches.com/gblogrhiannonellis.htm

http://elaina-lee.blogspot.com/2011/04/excerpt-thursday-rhiannon-ellis-dark.html

http://www.heatherwebb.net/blog/?p=1341

http://blog.juliealindsey.com/julie-lindsey/writer-wednesday-welcomes-rhiannon-ellis/

http://www.loveromancepassion.com/holy-speed-writer-batman-my-hero/comment-page-1/#comment-12092

http://moxiegirlwriting.blogspot.com/2011/04/speed-writernot-so-much.html#comments

http://nikkibrandyberry.wordpress.com/2011/03/28/guest-post-with-author-rhiannon-ellis/#comment-2195

http://blueridgelitagency.blogspot.com/2010/11/mlm-basketball-and-publishing-oh-my.html

http://www.shewrites.com/profiles/blogs/its-a-family-thing

http://vintagevonnie.blogspot.com/2010/11/guest-blogger-rhiannon-ellis.html

PRESS RELEASES & MISC.

MomsEveryday.com– Fun Mommy Fail

MomsEveryday.com–Creative Or Creepy?

MomsEveryday.com–No Means…Maybe

http://www.colealpaugh.com/blog/?p=129

http://camelpress.com/2011/03/25/bonded-in-brazil-a-novel-about-love-and-winemaking/

http://www.briefingwire.com/pr/camel-press-announces-the-release-of-bonded-in-brazil-a-novel-about-love-and-winemaking 

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What’s Everyone Doing?

I didn’t intend to get this into twitter.  I love my facebook, and I always thought that  twitter was something just for people with fancy phones.  I use my cell phone to… brace yourselves…  make phone calls while I’m on the go.  And it’s left in my purse, turned off, most of the time.

Paul Teutul JrThen I was looking around Paul Jr Designs’ website, and although he didn’t have a link to facebook, he did have a  twitter account.  So, I dove in, and started following him.

A short time later, I was researching literary agencies, working towards the promise I made my husband that, this time, I would seek publication.  I found a website for Nelson Literary Agency, LLC  in Denver, Colorado.  They had the magic combination of accepting Romance, Science Fiction, and GLBT fiction (my novels have all these elements) and SQUEE!!! they were in the state where I grew up, and someday hope to return!  I found several people to follow from the lists of agents and authors.

From there, my list quickly grew as I connected with other writers of all ilks, and found other resources such as Writers Digest.  Being OCD (Obsessive, in particular, though with lots of help I’ve learned to handle it) I made a point to begin each morning by scrolling back to the point in my twitter feed that I left off the previous night, to make sure I didn’t miss anything.

I don’t do that anymore.  I want to, but it has become impossible.  I still scroll back a little bit, but in the middle of the day, even just an hour’s worth of tweets can be too much!

So, here’s a glimpse of what I see each day.

Marie Sexton is slowing herself down for a bit, though she is still providing her followers with a little NSFW man candy every now and then. It is usually safe to assume that, if it’s from Marie, it’s NSFW, although she does sometimes surprise us with something innocent and cute.

Kat Brauer is going to bed (She lives in Japan).  She tweeted that she “Got through chapter four of my first #amediting round for Agent of Awesome. Goal for tomorrow: thru 10.”

Tiffany Reisz got her cover for “The Siren”.  She and her agent are actively promoting the novel.  Shoot…  I can’t put the whole picture here because I promised I would keep the images to “PGish”.  But click on it to go to the agency’s website and you can see it in all its steamy glory!  Or here for a better view…

Tymothy Longoria is a mere 1800 words short of his word count goal.  On a side note, he says  “And now before I go conquer this WIP, I just realized we all sound like Elmer Fudd gettin’ scurred when we “retweet”. #JustSayin”  Oh!  I get it!  Hey, that’s actually pretty funny…

Roni Loren has a new feature on her author/non-fictiongroupie website called “Fictional Boyfriend of the Week

By Sceptre at en.wikipedia [CC-BY-SA-2.5 (www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5)], from Wikimedia CommonsCentrechick is tweeting about having construction done on her roof, which I find endlessly funny considering her avatar is Dr. Who’s Tardis…

Scarlett Parrish is cursing fluently about having to write a blog post for tomorrow.  Later, she adds “Hello new followers! Expect lots of swearing and filth. Well I am an erotic romance author after all, so you can’t complain.”

Jane Kindred has named Robert Downey, Jr. as her new BFF Apparently, since she mentioned him on her blog, she is now getting traffic from people randomly searching his name.  Kinda like what I’m trying here…

Kirstie Alley is tweeting from the bathtub, trying not to get electrocuted by her iPhone.

Doctor Ruth tweets “A new CNN poll says that now a majority of Americans are for gay marriage, which is to say they’re for marriage, the way I look at.”  I love Doctor Ruth!

Several friends getting ready for Seder, including Sara Megibow who is doing it twice…

Branli is tweeting from work.

Wil Wheaton (yes, Trek fans, THAT Wil Wheaton) is blogging regarding acting and loneliness today.

And then, a random tweet from someone I don’t recognize… a retweet, really, stops me in my tracks and I absolutely have to go read this NOW…

thegayYA Gay YA  by sarahreesbrenna “In the world of my novels, being gay doesn’t matter.”http://bit.ly/gdGbeq by @malindalo

OMG!!!  Me too!   I must read this post and comment on it and celebrate that I found someone else writing in a world free of homophobia, where every is acknowledged to be bisexual.  One difference… in my world, everyone is on a “curve”, with some preferring the opposite gender.  Now I have to go figure out who “the gay YA” is…  presumably “The Gay Young Adult”, and I will start following them.

And then I return to my regularly scheduled feed…

Hmmm…  Wednesday is George Takei’s birthday!  He always has great tweets for his fans.  I want a tee shirt that says “I Retweet for George Takei!”  Here’s a good one (OK, it was a Monday tweet, but who’s checking?)  “An fascinating step toward Scotty really being able to beam me up!  As my fans say on Twitter: #Nerdgasm

Leah Petersen wants to know “What’s the word I’m looking for. Means always correct. An adjective.#amwriting”  I feel that this is a quest I should conquer, and spend a few minutes trying to find the right word, but I fail and give up after ten minutes.

And that’s just a tiny glimpse of Tuesday!  No wonder I’m not getting much actual writing done.

Oh, and Paul Teutul Jr?  What’s he doing?  The new episodes of American Chopper are about begin again, and they jumped through a lot of hoops to shoot a promo video without ever having Junior and Senior in the same room.

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Unmentionables

Today is Palm Sunday, and just like every week, my husband and I packed up the kids into the Mom-Van and went to church.  It’s a part of our lives.  It’s what we do.

In fiction, many writers treat their characters’ spiritual lives as an unmentionable.  Whatever they’re doing in there, we just won’t talk about it.  Like going to the bathroom… we know it’s happening, but we don’t want to hear it described!

Even worse than failure to mention is the assumption that the characters simply have no spirituality or faith of any kind.  In Science Fiction, many authors treat religion as something that cave men invented and the enlightened masses of the future have outgrown.  In the Romance genre, (with the notable exception of inspirational romance) some authors seem to be working under the assumption that if their characters are having sexual thoughts and feelings before they’re in a committed relationship, they must not be religious.

Currently there is a trend (not just in fiction, but in life) for people to shun organized religion, but embrace spirituality.  I think spirituality is a wonderful thing, and is an important aspect of every human life.  But I don’t shun organized religion, and I don’t see humanity ever “outgrowing” it, as if it was a childish fancy.  A people united can do great works, from helping the poor and feeding the hungry to providing the fellowship and encouragement every individual’s needs.  I appreciate the fact that every Sunday morning I can be in church listening to a sermon with other adults while all the children are learning and exploring their own faith with their peers.

It is true that, in our society today, sexuality is a “special topic” within the church setting, if it is ever brought up at all.  Many churches encourage abstinence till marriage, although there is a slow shift towards acknowledging that pre-marital sex is not a sin.  I like to think that, in the future, a human’s sexuality can be discussed within any setting, without it being a taboo subject.

On Kingdom Come, (where most of my current stories are set) there are churches as well as what I call “Spiritual Centers” which are more like convenience stores where a person can get a brief “spiritual fix”.  It’s not so much that I like the idea of convenience store religion, but I do think it’s a reasonable extrapolation.

Without really giving too much away (OK, “Spoiler Alert” after the next gratuitous image, just in case you really do want to be able to read my novels without ANYTHING being given away beforehand, you should stop reading now…)

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In one story, the characters receive gentle teasing from their church community because their group marriage is formed via several weddings over the course of several years.  In another story, one of the main characters is priest who has just as “normal” and healthy a sex life as the other main characters.  In most of my stories, I at some point mention that the characters went to some version of church or temple or other religious or spiritual organization.  It’s not a main theme in the story, but neither is it the kind of detail that is simply swept under the rug as if it had no place in their lives.

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Interview With Patty Wright

Patty Wright is well known to Star Trek fans as a dynamo for Star Trek: Phase II, a fan based production that continues the five year mission of Captain Kirk’s Enterprise.  When she’s not hanging out in the future, you can find her in the past, sewing frock coats and surprising anyone who googles her with the breadth and depth of her life’s experiences.

1)     What is your earliest Star Trek related memory?

Strangely enough, my earliest Star Trek memory is finding the treasure of used Trek books in our local used bookstore. I don’t ever remember actually watching the episodes, but clearly I did: I knew them all by heart. Every week I would bike the mile to that corner store and lay down my 10 cents for another James Blish novelization or a poorly written original novel.

It’s rather telling that even back then I was hungry for more Trek than the television had to offer. I also remember it being my first learning experience in the difference between prose and scripts. Blish slavishly kept to the “one point of view” in his prose versions of the episodes, so you only saw what Kirk saw. I am sure that is what sparked my fanfiction passion: not only did I want to read about what happened to the other characters in the episodes – I wanted to know MORE about what they were doing than we ever saw on screen. I just always remember wanting MORE Trek…always.

2)     What was it about Walter Koenig, Star Trek TOS’s Chekov that inspired you to write fan fiction and start a fan site for him?

Wow… that’s a really involved question! When I was in middle school I had a thing for fictional male characters that were little guys with dark hair, dark eyes, and accents. I carried a torch for Tony Orlando and “Chico” (Freddie Prinze) for two years. I even published a “Tony Orlando” fanzine that had an “impressive” two-issue run, and I wrote a “Chico and the Man” episode. I actually sent the episode to Jack Komack (“Chico”’s producer) – believe it or not – hand-written on a yellow legal pad. He sent me back a hand-written note that said “Thanks so much!” and two crisp $20. The episode was filmed without a single change, but credited to the show’s writing team. It’s on the “Best of” DVD.

Orlando retired and Prinze had a gun accident, so I switched my attention to Chekov from Star Trek. I think he stuck with me when I out-grew the “teenage crush” stage because, unlike the earlier “romances”, Chekov was basically the big brother every girl wished she had. You know, the kind that would take you to the prom if your date dumped you. He was a good guy, and as I got to know him better, I found he was not only a good friend to spend time with, but I identified with his heritage. Like a lot of us nerds (who, us?!) I research ad nauseium any subject that tweaks my curiosity. In researching Russian history and culture, I gained a deep respect and admiration for the people that they are and how they’ve maintained their identity despite all the tides of history that have washed over them. They were the type of people I strived to be as an individual. And in researching Walter Koenig, I didn’t find a celebrity, but a down to Earth, self-depreciating, ridiculously multi-talented man. What isn’t he good at? He can even tap dance!

A Russian acquaintance I had started me writing Chekov fanfiction. I shared a wonderful, angst ridden Chekov fanfic I’d found with him – and as he read it he started laughing so hard tears streamed down his face. Chekov declared, “When pigs fly!” in it – Mischa explained: “the closest a Russian could come to that is ‘When pork chops grow wings’: and they’d put him in a mental hospital for saying it!” He refused to read it and told me: “YOU know Russians – and Chekov – better than that!” And so my fanfic career was born…. My first fanfic project was a Mirror Universe crossover novel named “Broken Image” that I wrote with my college friend, Elizabeth Frim, and that Shirley Maiweiski edited for us. It turned into a trilogy and the alternate Klingon homeworld we created, “Kaicamdrea” became it’s own entity with a language, card games, uniforms and clothing, maps, et al. It even had it’s own fan club!

As far as the site goes, because of my wealth of useless knowledge on all things Chekov – including having contact with everyone else writing Chekov fiction, I was considered the “Chekov go to” gal for quite awhile. My friend, Lisa Mawson, encouraged me to collect all this useless stuff into an organized place for people to access, and she helped me design and put up the first site. It didn’t really take off until I retired and had gobs of extra time on my hands. With the help of Cheryl Morris I finished the site and added sections dedicated to Walter Koenig: not just because he’s Chekov, but because there are so many varied projects he’s working on that his fans wanted to keep up to date on and there really was no where else on the internet to do that.

The Chekov site remains the single best resource on Chekov and his heritage for fanfic writers, but it’s also been used in schools as a resource on Russia and her people. A high school invited me on a trip to Russia in 2007 as their cultural expert because of the site, and it was an amazing trip. I’ve also served as a mediator with immigrants from the former Soviet Union in my community. The Walter Koenig site is now Walter’s official site.

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www.walterkoenigsite.com/chekovsite

3)     How did you go from being just a fan to administrating two websites for Walter Koenig?

Walter called and asked me to. It’s that simple. Someone had alerted him to my site and he watched it for a few months. When I heard his voice on the phone I thought he was going to tell me to stop stalking him on the Internet, but he asked if I would consider making it his official site. What made it an easy decision was how genuine and funny he is. I knew it would only enhance my life to work for Walter, and it has. He’s become the kind of friend to me that most people only hope to find in their life and I am truly grateful for that.

4)     When did you meet Mr. Koenig in person?

The story I like to tell is that I was riding in an elevator at a con talking about my latest Chekov fanfic with a friend and the guy next to me winked at me when I got off. It was Walter! What I am sure you are asking is when we first met “not as fan”. I flew out to Beverly Hills to attend the red carpet premier of “World Enough and Time” and a mutual friend, Leslie Hoffman, arranged for a lunch with Walter and his wife, Judy Levitt. They’re good people, which is a rarity in today’s world.

5)     Besides Star Trek, what other fan fiction do you like to write?

None, really. I did write two “Babylon 5” stories that focused on Walter’s character, Psy Cop Alfred Bester. It was an interesting change as the character was a futuristic version of Adolf Hitler. When they published the professional “Psy Corps” trilogy, however, they basically filled in every minute of Bester’s life so it didn’t feel like there were any more stories to tell. It was probably for the best, as it’s not a character’s mind that was a good place to spend a lot of time in. I love spending time in other writer’s worlds but have never been inspired to add to those worlds like I am by Roddenberry’s vision of our future.

6)     Could you please explain what “filk” is?  Is it fun?  Is it profitable?  Can you hum a few bars?

It’s a folk song about science fiction subjects. It’s a musical version of fanfiction. The term “filk” is credited as a typo in an early convention program. It has an honored tradition because most of the early ones were based on old sea shanties: or work and folk songs for sailors. I don’t think it’s actually that profitable because I don’t see a lot of filk singers doing it to make a living on a long-term basis, but it certainly is fun. Back in the “old days” of conventions, after midnight fans would gather in rooms and sing enmasse (off key) at the top of their lungs until dawn. And on long car trips to cons, it’s pretty much required that the trip is spent singing “Born Again Trek” until everyone in the car is hoarse and other cars race to avoid yours: and on the way home you sing “Weekend Only World” with tears streaming down your face. It’s like crack – an instant high of bonding with your ‘fan family’!

I’ve written a few of them because I follow the sea music circuit and often times songs written for ships and sailors 100 years ago speak to me about life on ships that travel through the stars 100 years from now. I could hum a few bars… but it would drive everyone off your blog! God blessed me with the heart of a folk singer and the voice of a banshee.

7)     What does Ticonderoga’s Elvis have to do with Star Trek?  You do that website too?

Didn’t you know it was Elvis who saved Star Trek? James Cawley, who was voted the #1 Elvis impersonator in the country in 97, was also the man who created “Star Trek: New Voyages/Phase II” back in 2003. A professional actor and businessman, James had actually been working on making his own Star Trek TOS episodes since the age of 5: when his father built him his first bridge. His lucrative career as Elvis funded the production for many years.

With the help of Carol Fogg, I did set up the “Ti-Elvis” site as a template so that James’ large and active fan club (headed by President Gail Beckenstein) would have a place to collect all the information and memories they wanted to share with each other and the world at large. It’s also a way for his fans spread across the country to keep in touch with each other: an advantage that the Internet now provides. It was the fan club’s years of detailed newsletters that provided all the information that it contains. As such, it’s still a work in progress, but I do keep the information on James’ concert schedule up to date for his fans. www.ti-elvis.com

8)     How did you first come to be involved in Phase II?

Gary Evans, one of Phase II’s executive producers, contacted me to offer his help in the campaign to get Walter his Star on the Hollywood Walk of Fame. (Walter is still the only main TOS cast member not to have one. You can find more information at: www.walterkoenigsite.com/waltersstar) When Gary learned about my costuming background he invited me to attend the BAF shoot in June 2007. I contacted Walter and asked his opinion of the production. He had high praise and explained it was a group of dedicated fans that had built the sets in an old garage and filmed their own episodes. Seriously? I told him those were the kinds of fans you AVOID at conventions. Walter tried to dismiss my concerns by telling me it was run by an Elvis impersonator and he thought I would have fun. My response? “And it’s all run by a fat old bald guy in a white polyester jumpsuit? What did I ever do to make you hate me this much?!”

My concerns remained, but I attended the shoot “for a couple days” for the sole purpose of seeing the sets once and meeting David Gerrold in person. I not only stayed for my entire vacation, James Cawley arranged for me to be relieved of my duties at Mystic Seaport’s Sea Music Festival so I could stay on until the end. (An article that Orion Press asked me to write on attending that shoot can be found here: http://www.fastcopyinc.com/orionpress/fanfilms/playingstartrek.htm)

9)     The IMDB credits you with makeup, costuming, writing, and producing for Star Trek New Voyages: Phase II, as well as countless other positions.  Which jobs attract you the most, and which jobs would you rather avoid?

Everyone in the production does a whole lot of jobs, so I am only an example of the great people involved rather than an exception. What attracts me most is the work James and I do together: costuming, writing, and being his executive assistant. These takes allow me to use what I believe are my greatest skills and work with a friend who’s like a brother to me. When James and I met, we just clicked. We have the same interests, the same approach to things, and both our personalities and work styles compliment each other…so working with him on costumes, scripts and as his assistant is a pleasure and a constant challenge for both of us to grow.

The other jobs (other than “producer”, who is a “funding” title) are ones I stepped into when someone needed to do them, but I prefer to avoid them. I am glad I had the opportunity to challenge myself (I even “directed” for a whole 15 minutes LOL), as I tend not to have ambition to do new things, but it just made it more clear to me that I’d rather stay with the tasks that bring me joy. The job I would absolutely never want to do is to be an actor or an extra. Except for interactive theatre (which I love) I have a performance phobia and, if I managed not to faint when the camera was turned on, I would start giggling ridiculously. (Called “inappropriate affect” in technical terms!) The one thing Phase II does not need is an extra wasting precious shooting time.

10)  What was your role in the upcoming Phase II episode “Kitumba”?

I was the lunatic locked in the tower room! Seriously, though, I believe that “Kitumba” was the pinnacle of achievement for Phase II in every way: including testing us to the utmost limits and showing us how things have to change as we continue on. And that’s how it was for me personally as well. Filming “Kitumba” was a massive, difficult, trying undertaking for everyone. There were over 70 extra cast, two over-night location shoots, large fight scenes, large crowd scenes, complicated new sets, many key people who either became ill or who found they were not able to keep up with the exhausting schedule: all in addition to the normal long hours and oppressive heat. I scheduled the shoot, acted as one of the AD’s on set – coordinating the daily shoot, helped coordinate the lodging and travel, found real Klingons to help decorate the sets, was James’ assistant, and was the “problem solver” on the set… in addition to a myriad of other things I can’t even remember now.

Before the actual shoot, of course, I had two main jobs. First, James asked me to “update” John Meredyth Lucas’ original two-part “Kitumba” script that he wrote for Paramount’s Phase II, as it now conflicted with Trek canon. When I read it, however, I discovered it was only a writer’s working draft. There were even scenes that were repeated verbatim several times because Lucas hadn’t decided where to put them. I ended up using only the basic premise and wrote a new story and script. Instead of making it “not violate canon”, I also chose to use it to explain the changes in Klingons from TOS to the Feature Films. It’s the only script I didn’t give to James in pieces, because I wanted him to read the new take on it “whole” before he made a decision. He ended up loving it.

Second, the script called for us to see a very large number of Klingons, both military (TOS and feature film) and civilian. For the military we called on Anne Carrigan and John Paladin to add to our stock uniforms. For the civilian, James and I studied Klingon civilian dress that had been seen in the feature films, as well as Worf’s wedding. We decided to go with Elizabethean doublets (which Worf wore for his wedding) made out of heavy upholstery fabric, leathers and furs; and sprinkled with Klingon adornments. I needed to make 59 civilian costumes and dozens of people chipped in on the marathon sewing sessions at the studio to get them made in time, or help sew people into unfinished costumes on set when we ran out of time. (You’ll actually see a Kaicamdrean uniform in this episode.) I was determined that everyone that wanted to would appear on screen in “Kitumba” because it was a unique opportunity. I supervised the same kind of Herculean efforts to make up all those Klingons and keep them looking the same from shot to shot, day to day. All those costumes and makeup had to also be transported, guarded, organized, and temporary makeup and wardrobe rooms set up.

Everyone involved in “Kitumba” went above and beyond the limits of human endurance and ability…and it shows in the final product. It taught us not only what we were capable of, but also how we had to reorganize things to make them work better in the future. It’s because of this shoot that I began “stepping back” my workload.

11)  How many hats are you going to wear for the upcoming shoot this summer?

The ones I love. I’ve been making costumes, and had the privilege of writing the script. The original story was a fanfic classic written by an old friend of mine, Shirley Maiweiski (known as “Gramma Trek” to fans), who asked James to film it. I was honored that her family trusted me to do justice to Shirley’s original vision, and pleased that feedback from her fans reflect the opinion that I did just that. It was a challenge to make basically a character story into a TOS script that would keep fans interested and still keep the basis of the story there, but I think I did just that. I’ll also be doing on-set makeup and wardrobe when at the shoot because it drives me to distraction when I see sweaty faces or twisted uniforms in footage we’ve shot and my experience as a theatrical costumer gives me a second nature when it comes to those things. James also asked me to arrange group tickets to his concerts during the shoot, so that the crew that want to attend will be guaranteed seats: so I guess arranging for the tickets and transportation to the concerts is another “job” I’ll be doing this summer.

12)  What other projects are you involved in with Retro Film Studios?

All of them! I’m a writer, producer and costume designer for RFS. The projects I’m working on that have been announced are “Buck Rogers Begins” and “Back to the Wild Wild West”. Both of them have allowed me to stretch my skills as a period costumer (for two very different periods) and as a writer. I need to be pushed to try new skills and I never would have found out I could write for different types of series if James hadn’t asked me to participate in other RFS projects.

13)  Your son Michael suggested I ask about grant writing.  What is that?  Have you done it?

Grant writing is a very intensive process that basically requires you to beg for money from the government or foundations and prove you deserve it. I did it once, got a lot of money, but hate the entire concept. Mike was more likely referring to the great bulk of the writing I’ve been paid to do – which was as a Licensed Certified Social Worker. Most of my writing you’ll never find unless you are trying to teach folks with developmental disabilities. Although I was encouraged by many people to become a professional writer, my response was always “I want to eat.” I didn’t think writing was a practical way to survive, and I didn’t want to write non-fiction because it seemed stifling. If my life has proven anything, it’s that what you’re meant to do will win out in the end no matter how you try to thwart it. I wrote entire policy manuals, press releases, mission statements, brochures, ad campaigns, assessments, training manuals, and many courses to teach people to teach: as well as seminars that I held and taught other people to hold.

14)  You do know that this whole writer/blogging thing of mine is partly your fault, right?  It was your facebook link to NaNoWriMo that inspired me to finally finish a whole, full length novel.  What are you doing for NaNoWriMoo’s counterpart, Scriptfrenzy this month?

I’m so glad that the NaNo challenge got you writing! That’s the whole point… to encourage people to take the plunge and just do it. The script I’m working on for the script challenge is titled “Wings Against the Water”. It’s a drama about a girl coming of age during the depression at the same time her community is being torn apart. I’ve wanted to tell this story literally since I was in high school. I revisit it every so often and I thought that being pushed to write an entire script will finally get me to finish the first draft of it.

15)  Many writers admit that they go through a stage where they hate what they write.  Have you experienced that?

Absolutely: all the time! That’s why I make it a point to have more than one thing in progress at once, and to have a story editor. When I think the script I am working on is complete rubbish I’ll put it aside and work on something else. I have four scripts, a Russian historical sci fi novel, and three fanfics I am working on right now. I tend to come to the conclusion that they are a waste of paper when I finish anything as well. Fortunately, I have a friend, Diane Randle, who is not only a screenwriter but also a really gifted story editor and gives me very specific and honest feedback. I’d never finish anything without her! I also rely on James Cawley, who knows Trek better than anyone else I know, and the readers on FanFiction.net for feedback. Feedback stokes my creative fires. (link to FF.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/587072/Andriech)

16)  How hard is it for you to switch gears between writing scripts and writing in story form?

I find it’s far easier to switch from prose to script writing than the opposite. There are a few “hooks” you have to remember in writing a script. You start scenes in the middle, show anything you can rather than speak about it, and limit the descriptions so as not to annoy the director. The latter is why it’s difficult to switch from script to prose… at least for me. I have to walk away… literally. I take a walk through the woods to immerse myself in the world so my brain can relearn to exist totally in the world I am creating so I can put the reader there too.

17)  My research for this interview kept bringing up more and more of your experience!  What has been your favorite paid position?

Qualified Mental Retardation Professional for Good Shepherd Lutheran Home of the West. (Yeah, it’s a mouthful!) I was the director of 12 group homes for people with developmental disabilities and was able to actually see the difference I made, which was very self-satisfying. When I moved to Arizona at the end of the 80’s, they were just beginning to make the changes in services that had been made on the East Coast at the beginning of the 70’s. So I was there at the optimum time to institute changes. What I developed was a curriculum course that allowed the clients to choose electives (such as cooking or balancing a checkbook) in addition to requirements (such as personal safety) – much like a college. “Habilitation” usually involves a group of workers deciding what the person should be learning based on their own values and goals. My curriculum approach allowed the people needing services to be in control of their own lives for the first time, which is a radical concept even today.

18)  What has been your favorite unpaid position?

Most definitely Mystic Seaport. I am able to share my passions, knowledge, meet people from all over the world, and learn so much at the same time. I am an expert at what it was like to live on sailing ships in the 18th and 19th century and working in the exhibits with the visitors and kids from is a great deal of fun. They gave me the opportunity to learn to climb the rigging and work the sails, work on building ships, and to sail a wide variety of boats.

It was also my first formal costuming job, and it allowed me to do so much more as a seamstress than I ever expected. I had to learn to precisely recreate period costumes from the same materials and exactly the way they were made originally in order for them to be used by the museum. My last year in the costume shop at Mystic Seaport, I supervised and costumed both their theatrical productions: “Nautical Nightmares” and “Lantern Light Tours”, with 300 actors in each. That taught me a great deal about theatrical costuming, and I also learned about film production when I assisted in costuming several movies and documentaries that shot on the Seaport grounds. (Including “Gangs of New York” and a docudrama starring Robert Sean Leonard.) I have since costumed for four more museums, and without that training, when I encountered James Cawley and his precise recreations of TOS costumes I probably would have walked away rolling my eyes at his anal-retentativeness. I never lost my love of historical costuming and now both costume for and sit on the Board of Directors for Westfield on Weekends, my community museum.

19) I was much later getting these questions to you than I usually am with my subjects. I just kept digging up more and more interesting stuff on you!  So, what did I miss?

I was a newspaper reporter and columnist for several years. Early in our marriage, my husband and I lived in a mountain hilltown in a house that was a converted 19th century grain store with our five kids. Even with our two incomes it was difficult to keep the kids fed and clothed and keep the roof over our heads from leaking. I brought in extra money by selling Avon, Tupperware, and a few other similar that have since disappeared.  When our hot water heater exploded, my best friend Rita Barlow suggested I write a human interest piece for the local paper – a follow up to year-long community drive to fund the surgery for her infant daughter that was born with a congenital heart defect. Despite my reservations, Rita was right. I sold the piece to the paper with the worst sales pitch anyone could use: “You don’t want to print this, right?” Within in a week I was a reporter for two newspapers, wrote human-interest articles, and had two on-going columns: one a weekly “Erma Bombeck” type, and one a monthly column on astronomy. There was nothing prize winning, but it helped pay the bills.

20)  When the day comes that you have to make a speech as you accept some huge award, whom will you most likely forget to thank?

Everyone. I faint on stage!

After finishing Patty’s interview, I continued to uncover more and more about her.  When I confronted her with this surplus of information, she made a very Shrek-like comparison of herself to an onion!  So here’s a little bit of what I missed:

Patty was a Licensed Certified Social Worker for 20 Years, ran programs that taught people with developmental disabilities to live independently, and did wedding and event planning.

After she took early retirement, she threw her energy into volunteering for museums, and logged over 1,000 hours at Mystic Seaport in under 2 years. 

Patty’s been married for 27 years to a man that was a blind date her sister set her up with; they’ve raised 5 kids and a couple foster kids. 

She’s lived in Western Massachusetts her entire life, except for a brief stint in Arizona.

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And the Characters Take Over

The other day, Jane Kindred tweeted that one of her characters was demanding a story of his own.  I’m not sure whether or not she gave in…

I know exactly what she means.  I had planned to spend April doing Scriptfrenzy, but although I did write an entire outline for a Star Trek TOS episode (Intended for submission to Phase II) and I used google translate to create some alien terminology, I have yet to read through the submission guidelines and write out either the story treatment or the actual script.

I also only got halfway through Lahla Land, and it’s a short story that really shouldn’t take me too long.  I’m debating whether my characters would have sex on their first date, or whether I want to have them wait.  Not that I condone having sex with someone you’ve barely met, but… it might be something these characters would do.  Then again, I market myself as writing “Sweet” stories, and that kind of relationship just doesn’t fit in with my meme.

What I did do today was write 2,326 words of a new WIP.  I wanted to step away from Kingdom Come for a while, but like Jane’s character, mine were fighting to have their story written.  I’d been making notes, but the voices not only became insistent, but I was seeing the opening scene play out in my head.

I had to do it.

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Group Marriage

(Photo by Dd-b, taken at the 1976 World Science Fiction Convention in Kansas City MO USA, at which Heinlein was the guest of honor. Detail from the wikimedia commons image RAHeinlein.autographing.Midamericon.ddb-371-14-750px.jpg. Retouched by wikipedia us)

The first time I read about the concept of group marriage in a positive light was in the prolific works of the late great Robert Heinlein.  It is a recurring theme in his stories.  (OK, several spoiler alerts coming for Heinlein’s novels…)  In The Number of the Beast a father and daughter and their two love interests travel time, space, and alternate dimensions.  They eventually end up joining another of Heinlein’s groups including Lazarus Long (Much of his story is told in Time Enough for Love) and Lazarus’ own mother, Maureen (Her story is told in To Sail Beyond the Sunset.)

I was simultaneously fascinated and repulsed.  The marriage was written as one big, happy group, living together and raising children together.  These were not “sister wives”, but women who had active and loving relationships with their husbands and each other.  Likewise, the men were also passionate with each other, although it was clear that most characters preferred heterosexual relationships.  It seemed like such a great situation, taking a team approach to marriage and parenting!  But my conservative upbringing recoiled at the idea of such a free attitude regarding sex.  It didn’t help that Heinlein continued the shock value of the group marriages into the realm of incest, with grown children becoming their parents’ lovers.  Several of Heinlein’s group marriages were also “open” sexually, with different spouses taking sexual partners in various situations.  In one of Heinlein’s later works, Friday, a man meets a woman while he’s on a business trip and she eventually joins his already established group marriage.

Heinlein was not the only pioneer to explore the concept of group marriage.  In Star Trek, Enterprise, Dr. Phlox (a Denobulan, one of many alien races in Star Trek) has three wives, each of whom has two other husbands.  In the Star Trek, The Next Generation episode Up the Long Ladder, two colonies must unite and embrace group marriage in order to have a sufficient gene pool.

In my own stories, I wanted to create a society where group marriage was the norm, not some radical arrangement.  In order to provide a plausible reason for this to come about, I took a clue from Up the Long Ladder, and created a world where there was some kind of disaster that reduced the population of the colony to a dangerously low number.  Out of necessity, each woman has children by several men, and each man fathers children by several women.  The colony goes through a stage where “free love” reigns, and promiscuity is common.  Subsequent generations see many problems with this culture, namely the difficulty in providing a stable home for children when the parents have a complicated chain of relationships, and they eventually stabilize their tradition into closed units of several men and women.  The stories I’m writing take place several hundred years after the colony’s initial founding and struggles.

Life on Kingdom Come is pleasant and relatively uneventful.  My stories are not about saving the galaxy, nor about the next huge breakthrough in science.  There is plenty of Science Fiction in the setting, from the conveniences they use to their interaction with other colonies.  The stories are nice, sweet, spicy romances where the reader can never be sure how many or which genders might be involved!  Group marriages are the norm, and a “perfect eight” refers to four men and four women all in a union, and they get bragging rights if they reached that point via one large wedding where all eight came together.  Smaller marriages of three to seven spouses are common, and sometimes two small marriages merge to form one larger one.  Larger marriages are not unusual, although the government created an artificial “cap” of twelve spouses for logistical reasons.  Couples usually find themselves pressured by societal norms to “expand” their marriage to a more “normal” size.

While discussing this idea with another writer, they remarked that it might be very difficult to support so many spouses.  “Wouldn’t they all be on welfare?”  This question took me by surprise, because one of the benefits I was considering was the financial one!  I think my friend was assuming that only one spouse would work, trying to take care of a harem at home.  But just the opposite is true.

Consider it this way.  Take three suburban families, each with two parents and two or three kids.  Three houses, six cars, and the list of resources goes on.  Now, take those three families and unite them.  One large house could still be luxurious and not equal the size of the three “normal” houses.  Kids would always have siblings to play with, even if they didn’t share the interests as every brother or sister.  The family could probably get by with just two or three cars instead of six.  One or two parents could be homemakers, leaving the other four or five to pursue careers and provide financial support.  If one spouse was sick or lost their job, the impact on the family would be far less than if there were only two spouses.

How many of us have at one point wished we had a clone?  Someone else to do the laundry while we balance the check book?  How many moms have thought “I just need to run to the store for a minute, but the baby is sleeping, so I’ll have to wait.”  A team approach has many advantages in raising a family.

And it also presents a host of complications.

But those complications mean all kinds of new story ideas for a writer!

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Interview With Jane Kindred

Jane Kindred is the author of The Devil’s Garden, available from Carina Press in June 2011.  A true girl of the West, Jane was born in Billings, Montana and spent most of her childhood in the dry, hot cradle of the Catalina Mountains in Tucson, Arizona. Although she was repeatedly urged to learn a “marketable skill” in case she couldn’t find a man to marry her, she received a B.A. in Creative Writing anyway from the University of Arizona.  She now lives in San Francisco with her son and her partner, two feline overlords who are convinced she is constantly plotting their death, and a cockatiel named Imhotep who punishes her for sins in a past life.

1) You grew up in Arizona.  What was so inspiring about the wayback of a Plymouth Fury that provoked you to start writing?


My two older sisters were closer to each other in age and I often got relegated to the back, so I took to entertaining myself with stories. The Fury (technically a Fury III) also symbolizes for me the many Sunday morning drives to church amid much bickering. To escape from the family drama, and from the tedium of endless church services (we belonged to a charismatic post-Pentacostle sort of church in which godliness was apparently measured by hours spent in public worship), I tried to bury my nose in a book, but the only book I was supposed to be reading was the Bible, so I started writing the stories down in a notebook tucked inside it while I was allegedly taking notes on the sermons for my later edification.


2) What is your favorite electronic or digital tool to use for writing?


I’m either a purist or unimaginative when it comes to writing tools: I just use MS Word, with a liberal application of revision tracking.


3) What is your favorite non-electronic writing aide?


I don’t really use pen and paper anymore, unless I find myself stumbling into some kind of post-electromagnetic pulse apocalyptic world without computers, so I guess I’d have to say taking a shower. That’s where my muse lives, apparently, so if I’m stuck in a plot hole, I go take a shower and she usually gives me a mini-epiphany. (That is not a euphemism for anything else.)


4) How did you find your agent, Sara Megibow?


Through QueryTracker. I did a search on agents who represented fantasy and then went to each of their websites and Publisher’s Marketplace pages to determine which ones were looking for something similar to my work and whether their bios “clicked” for me. I liked Sara’s bio on the agency website, and thought it was exciting that she was a new agent at an agency with a great reputation, but ultimately (this is going to sound silly), I just liked her face. 🙂


5) Many writers go through a period when they hate what they’re writing.  Have you experienced that with any of your works?


Only the ones I’ve written. 😉 I never hate the actual story I’m writing (I write a story because I’m in love with it), but I often hate the words I’ve put down, feeling I’m not doing the story justice. So, yeah, just about every day.


6) Somewhere in my research you referred to feeling “post partum depression” after finishing a work.  Many writers admit to feeling that their works are like children.  How do you transition from feeling the story is your offspring to seeing it as a commodity that can be bought and sold?  …or do you?


I don’t know. Now I feel kind of creeped out. O_o


7) What is your connection to Phillip K Dick?  What are some of the odd little moments of synchronicity?


Oh, boy. If I tell you, it will make me sound like a crazy person. Luckily, I’ve never had a problem with sounding like a crazy person.

So I was writing this novel about a god who died and was reincarnated but didn’t remember she was a god. The story started pouring out of me and I didn’t know where it was coming from. Then while reading the dictionary one day (crap, did I say that out loud?) I came across this awesome word:anamnesis. It basically means the opposite of amnesia. I decided it would be the name of the river in my book, symbolizing where the memories of an unspeakable trauma were placed for safekeeping for the god to later remember.

Shortly afterward, I looked up the word again to be sure I had the definition right, and I came across this quote by Philip K. Dick: “I suddenly experienced what I learned is called anamnesis, a Greek word meaning, literally, ‘loss of forgetfulness.’ I remembered who I was and where I was. In an instant, in the twinkling of an eye, it all came back to me.” PKD felt he had a religious experience of a sort on a particular day in 1974 that set off this anamnesis. I read more of his writing on what he came to call “2-3-74.” He talked about writing stories that came from somewhere he couldn’t explain, and about anamnesis as the remembering of one’s divinity.

Then I wrote a chapter of Anamnesis that was absolutely horrifying, and I hadn’t seen it coming. And it poured out of me in more ways than one; I finished the chapter and ran to the bathroom, sick, and found I was basically hemorrhaging, and well, I’m going to stop there with that description. After that I started remembering things I didn’t want to remember. And they took place in the spring of 1974.

PKD almost seemed to be following me around after that. He showed up everywhere, little quotes, things I hadn’t known had anything to do with him that I had an affinity for. He had a twin sister who died a few weeks after their birth, and he felt haunted by her, like she was always with him. I saw her name given as Jane Kindred Dick in a few articles (Kindred, his mother’s maiden name, is the “K” in PKD), though elsewhere it’s listed as Jane Charlotte Dick. I just loved the way “Jane Kindred” sounded, and I figured, you know, she wasn’t using it. Hopefully, Phil doesn’t mind.


So, yeah. I told you it would sound crazy.


8 ) The Devil’s Garden is coming out in June from Carina Press, but they weren’t the first publisher.  What happened with the E-Book Publisher Who Shall Not Be Named?

The E-Book Publisher Who Shall Not Be Named (TEBPWSNBN) accepted The Devil’s Garden for publication last spring. A couple of months and rounds of edits in, I got a panicked email from my editor saying it had slipped her mind that TEBPWSNBN  didn’t accept material with underage sex in it because they felt it glorified pedophilia, and she shouldn’t have accepted my novella. The proposed solution was changing my 17-year-old courtesan to a 23-year-old so that she wouldn’t have had sex before the age of 18. The crux of Ume’s character is that though she was born male, she made herself into an amazing woman after being thrown out on the streets at the age of 12 for wearing women’s clothing. The story simply didn’t make sense if she was 6 years older. I refused to make the change and I lost. They were gracious enough to let me out of the contract and we parted ways. Happily, Carina picked the novella up five months later and they had no issues with the character’s age.


9) There is some debate in the world of publishing regarding whether it is acceptable to even mention the idea of an adolescent having sex, yet Hollywood has explored that theme over and over.  Do you think there is a double standard between fiction that is published as the written word and fiction that is distributed as a television show or movie?


With e-publishers, I believe it stems from child-protection laws that are specific to the Internet. In the early days of the e-book industry, some electronically published authors received threats of prosecution for child pornography over the issue of underage characters in sexual situations. That was several years ago, and I’ve never heard of anyone being successfully prosecuted for publishing fiction containing underage sex, but I suppose some publishers would rather err on the side of caution. It’s certainly their right to choose to publish or not publish whatever they want, but TEBPWSNBN’s submission guidelines didn’t and still don’t mention a restriction against underage sex, so their sudden objection to it was rather odd.

As for traditional print publishers, I don’t read much YA, so I’m not sure how strict publishers are about the issue, but I suppose there are more reactionary parents who demand that books be banned from libraries and classrooms than there are people who complain about what’s in an R-rated movie that teenagers aren’t supposed to be able to get into. Maybe that’s because books have no ratings, or because people are just really afraid of the power of the written word, and of the power of education. But I’m just speculating here.

10) You finished Anamnesis and Blood Maiden before finishing The Devil’s Garden.  What will have to happen for fans to be able to read these first two books and the related works?


I’m not sure they’re really meant to be read. They were my first two books, and everyone knows you’re supposed to hide those in a drawer or burn them.


11) What was unique about The Devil’s Garden that it was picked up by a publisher, while your other works are still waiting in the wings?


The Devil’s Garden is a prequel to Anamnesis that I wrote after it, and it’s the only one in that series that I’ve actually submitted for publication. Blood Maiden is a standalone romantic fantasy. I’ve only submitted it once, to an LGBT small press who rejected it for being “too heterosexual.” (The bisexual MC had both a male and a female love interest; the publisher was uncomfortable with the inclusion of the opposite-sex relationship and wanted the MC to decide she was a lesbian. I’m not sure they get what that “B” stands for in LGBT.) At any rate, I felt it needed more work before I submitted it anywhere else, and it isn’t the story I’ve wanted to focus on.


12) You have explored the “Out on the streets at an early age” theme with Ume in The Devil’s Garden and then Vasily in Arkhangel’sk . Did you draw on your own feelings from when you were 14 and your own mother died?



I’ve never been out on the streets, myself, so no, not really. I had a pretty sheltered upbringing. I like writing about “damaged” people, because they’re more interesting.

13) The Devil’s Garden is dedicated to Gwen Araujo, who was brutally murdered at 17.  How did you learn of Gwen’s story?


Honestly, I don’t remember. In my pre-writing notes for the novella, I talk about seeing my character as Gwen, but I don’t remember whether it was Gwen’s story that made me think of my character, or whether researching for my character brought me to an article about Gwen and her story resonated with what I was already working on. I may have seen a post about her on a political forum I was frequenting at the time, or on a local discussion list I belong to, or I may even have seen it on the news. All I know is that as soon as I saw her picture, I knew that’s what Ume looked like.


14) Arkhangel’sk is the first book in your Queen of Heaven trilogy.  You included a lovely teaser called Malchik on your blog.  What is the status of this work?


The House of Arkhangel’sk is currently out on submission. The wheels of the traditional publishing world turn slowly, so it may be quite some time before I know what’s going to happen to it.

15) Why do you torture Ola Vasilyevna so much?  Oh, and Ola told me I should also ask why you torture “Beli and Love”.  Can you answer that without giving too much away?  And which one is the Сумасшедшая?


Ola is my little spitfire. She may have told you that I torture her, but really she gets herself into these things and I just sit back and shake my head in amazement. She’s headstrong and impulsive and fiercely loyal. But I’ll admit it: I do torture Belphagor (only Ola and Vasily can get away with calling him Beli). I can’t help myself. Like Ola, Belphagor gets himself into things, and it gives me perverse pleasure to make him reap the consequences in the worst possible way; I think many authors are secretly sadists. Still, I feel Belphagor is a stronger character for all he’s been through. But Love? Oh, goodness, I don’t know why I do it. She’s the sweetest character I’ve ever written (and I don’t mean that in a saccharine or Mary Sue kind of way; she’s a very genuine person with a heart of gold). I put her through a lot, but you can’t break Love no matter how hard you try. Love is a fighter and a survivor.
Sumasshedshaya (Сумасшедшая) is Russian for Madwoman. That’s Ola’s name for me. Yup; now your readers know I’m crazy.

16) Does the Queen of Hell trilogy pick up where the Queen of Heaven books leave off, or do they stand alone?  What about Queen of Spheres?


Queen of Hell is a sequel to Queen of Heaven, featuring a different protagonist. Currently, it’s just the pair of trilogies, but I’ve been incubating the idea of a third trilogy called The Unseen Queen, about the antagonist from the first two, the queen of a fairy realm located in the forests of Russia. If I write that trilogy I’ll need a name for all three companion trilogies, so Queens of the Spheres is the working title for the series as a whole.

17) Is there enough room to get a new tattoo for every book?  What will the design be for The Devil’s Garden?


If I keep them small, maybe. The Devil’s Garden tattoo is going to be a sprig of plum blossoms covered in snow, from a pivotal scene in the novella where the god gives Ume proof of his divinity by conjuring it from the air. (Ume, incidentally, is the Japanese name for the plum trees that bloom in late winter in East Asia.)

18) You are a website design manager by day, a writer, a mother, and who knows how many other guises you take on!  How do you keep organized?


About as well as you’d expect. I’m currently taking applications for a personal assistant. There’s no pay, but it’ll look good on a resume and you get to read about naughty leather demons in Heaven and promiscuous angels in Hell.

19) What horrible things do you do to people who ask you where you get your ideas?


I write them into my stories and torture them, of course. And then I make them organize my paperwork.



20) When the day comes that you are presented with a prestigious award, who are you most likely to forget to thank?


Probably Mrs. Wheelock, my first grade teacher, who encouraged me to read ahead of my grade, and Mrs. Langworthy, my second grade teacher, who gave me my first chapter book (Little House in the Big Woods) for Christmas 1973 after I cried because my new school wouldn’t let me read ahead of my grade. So I’m thanking them here while I’m thinking of it. Might as well thank Mrs. Link, too, my seventh grade teacher at a very Christian school, who told me to go ahead and read the rest of The Once and Future King and not just stop at The Sword in the Stone like the rest of the class even though there was sex and magic in it. Yay for sex and magic! And let’s round it out with Ms. Bowland, my high school Shakespeare teacher, who let me take a second year of Shakespeare instead of Senior English, and who introduced me to Twelfth Night, where my love of cross-dressing heroines was born.
Thanks for interviewing me. This has been fun, if potentially ruinous for my career. 😉

Thank you so much for being so fascinating!

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