Teamwork

When I was little, I wanted to be either a writer or an architect. But I thought what I should be was…

A garbageman.

You see, I was a very conscientious child. I knew that the nice people in a team or group would be the ones to pick up the jobs or tasks that no one else wanted to do. This is what my family did; it’s how I was raised.

But I didn’t want to be a garbageman. My logic was that no-one else would want to do it, but someone had to, so it might as well be me. It wasn’t until I was an adult that I realized there are plenty of people out there who do want that job. Maybe it’s a family business. Maybe they like big trucks. There are a thousand reasons for choosing such a career.

I have two distinct college experiences, one as an 18 year old, and one as a married, non-traditional student. After graduating High School, I attended the University of Wyoming for two years, studying Architectural Engineering. One of the main reasons I dropped out was that I was over-committed, and I didn’t know how to cut back so I could have a manageable load. If a club I was involved in needed a volunteer for something, I was all in. I was the secretary of several clubs, and the president of another.

I did a lot of maturing in the six years in between that first college experience and my later return to academia. I was more comfortable being proactive about choosing my part in any team, although that position still remained “picking up the pieces” more often than not.

As a Mom, I’m no pushover. Yes, the buck stops with me, but I also delegate. A lot. A family is, after all, a team, and everyone pulls together.

Some may think of being a writer as a solitary path, but that’s far from the truth. Even while I’m churning out a rough draft, preferably in a locked room with no interruptions, I’m counting on my family to take care of a lot of the little daily details of life. When I stumble at a loss for words, I go to twitter and ask “What’s a word for ____?” I also count on twitter friends to write with me, prompting #1k1hr at any time of the day. I interact with #ROW80 friends for mutual encouragement, and to keep on track. I have Beta-readers and critique partners who more intimately participate in the growth of my novels.

Hopefully, soon I will add more specific professionals to my team. Or rather, from their point of view, I’ll be joining their team. There’s the possibility of gaining an agent, who will probably already have a number of author-clients. Then there will be a publisher, or publishing-house which is an entity comprised of several (or many) people. And there will be an editor, a professional who works for the publisher and helps me to revise my book until it is the best it can possibly be.

A nice thing happened to me this week… a friend in the writing world was answering some questions regarding LGBT for me, and she mentioned that her imprint would be very interested in seeing my Pangalactic Sojourners when they’re ready! So it looks like I’ll be tweaking my goals to put those books at the head of the list.

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Interview with Betsy Dornbusch

In 2012 Betsy Dornbusch launched her urban fantasy series, Sentinel, with Archive of Fire, featuring demidemons rebelling against the demon king Asmodai. She also writes a space operotica series Salt Road Saga, the first of which is Lost Prince. Her short fiction has appeared in print and online venues such as Sinister Tales, Big Pulp, Story Portal, and Spinetingler, and her work is in the anthologies Tasty Little Tales and Deadly by the Dozen. She’s been an editor with the ezine Electric Spec for six years and regularly speaks at fan conventions and writers’ conferences. She’s the sole proprietor of Sex Scenes at Starbucks (http://betsydornbusch.com) where you can believe most of what she writes. In her free time, she snowboards, air jams at punk rock concerts, and just started following Rockies baseball, of all things. Betsy is represented by Sara Megibow, Nelson Literary Agency.

1.       What was your path to publication? How did you really get your start?

My first short story appeared in Spinetingler in 2006. Most spec fic writers I know got their start in short stories. They teach you to write, to finish, to submit, to endure rejection, to learn about the industry, to learn how to be edited, to persevere and keep submitting…I could go on and on about the value of writing short fiction, especially if you plan to write science fiction or fantasy.

Book-wise, I got offered a contract to write in an acquaintance’s erotica franchise about a vampire dating service a few years ago. I took erotica on as a creative challenge and found I really liked it. My latest sale is a two book deal with Night Shade. It’s an epic fantasy about a man who is falsely convicted for murdering his wife and for the use of illegal magic, and he’s banished to an enemy country for the crime. It’s part political thriller, part mystery, part social commentary on prejudice, and hopefully a whole lot of fun for readers.

2.       What is your stance on the traditional vs self-publishing debate? What about print vs. electronic?

Ah jeez, HUGE question, and I have to admit, one I’m pretty tired of talking about, having just gotten back from a conference with Mark Coker and Donald Maass. I’ll approach it from my own career cuz your mileage may vary.

Traditional (from Big 6 to a small press) over self-publishing; print and electronic (and audio and foreign) over eBook only. The traditional print industry still has by far the best distribution system. Electronic books only account for about 14 % of the market, though of course it’s growing.

I’m also in favor of editors who work for publishers over editors who work for writers. Advances, salaried jobs, loyalty to their employer, and experience means an in-house editor is significantly financially invested in creating a very saleable book. There are good freelance editors out there, of course. But I prefer the employed sort.

Don’t get me wrong. I love eBooks and I read mostly on my Kindle app now. But I disagree with the 99c eBook, and sometimes even the 2.99 price point. It devalues all writers’ hard work and typically readers get what they pay for. That said, I think it won’t be a problem much longer; readers are getting savvy to pricing mechanisms like that. It’s my belief most readers will even tire of and ignore the free book marketing phenomenon. Personally, as a reader, I’m comfortable with eBooks costing about the same as a mass market paperback.

Never mind about the DOJ case against publishers and Apple. Much smarter people than me have much smarter things to say about it.

All that said, writers have more choices than ever before to get read, which is good for all of us. More power to you if you end up the next Joe Konrath. Just remember Joe spent a long time in the traditional publishing trenches before he hit Amazon.

3.       How did you become involved with Electric Spec?

My partners, Dave Hughes, Lesley Smith, and one retired editor, had just started the magazine six years ago when I joined their critique group. They asked me to come aboard on the second issue and I’ve been editing ever since. I just met one of our authors this weekend, in fact. So cool! It’s a total labor of love for the staff at Electric Spec.

4.       When you decided to sign with an agent, what made you choose Nelson Literary Agency over a NYC agency?

Put it this way: I’m a networking fiend (preferably with cocktail in hand) and my network paid off in helping me find Sara Megibow. It’s also a story of perseverance; Kristin Nelson gave me my first official agent rejection (along with a very helpful letter chock full of writing advice) eight years ago.

Nelson Literary Agency has a proven track record of sales, rock solid ethics, and are preparing to celebrate their 10th anniversary this year. As for their being in Denver, the world, especially the publishing world, is a very small place. Location matters less and less. Plus, bonus! Sara and I can go to lunch sometimes.

5.       What is a space operotica?

It’s my term for an erotic space opera–kind of a joke, really, but people really like the term. You never know what’s going to catch on, even if it is my job to know.

6.       In what way is Lost Prince an homage to Star Wars?

It’s got dog fights in space, a destroyed planet reminiscent of Tatooine, a deposed prince, a rebellion…  But there are definite differences, primarily the Salt Road, which is a Coalition-controlled trade route spanning six galaxies. But Katriel and Aric don’t fit the Star Wars Doe-Eyed Hero mold. My characters are my own.

7.       What’s the difference between Science Fiction and Speculative Fiction?

Speculative fiction is an all encompassing term for any fiction genre that speculates on reality, including Science Fiction, Fantasy, supernatural horror, and all the sub-genres therein.

8.       A little birdie told me I should ask you about the most embarrassing thing you’ve ever had published, in any manner? What was it?

I’m proud of all my books and stories. What I’m less proud of is when I get dragged into political conversations on Facebook. It’s an off-limits topic for me now.

9.       Your blog is called “Sex Scenes at Starbucks.” Does this refer to something that is written at Starbucks or something that happens at Starbucks?

It has lots of meanings, actually, from acronyms to tongue-in-cheek meanings that really only longtime readers would understand. It’s a recognizable handle though, which has paid dividends over the years.

The guy with the harmonica sang and played harmonica in a hotel bar for me for an hour when I was at a con. Things like this happen to me all the time. I don’t know why.

10.   Do you have rules for how steamy you write your sex scenes?

No rules. The characters decide and anything goes.

11.   Is your wholesome-looking profile picture misleading to readers? 🙂

The joke here is that I just made a gritty flyer for some upcoming signings and my picture doesn’t really fit in. To my credit, the rest of that outfit consisted of a bare back, f***-me heels, and ripped up rock star jeans. So the cropped picture is very misleading.

12.   I’ve had authors send me pictures of their pets, bookshelves, and artwork, but never guns! Is this a Colorado thing?

No, it’s a husband thing. He got me a couple of pistols for my birthday last year. The big one, the HK USP, is the closest thing on the market to my character Kaelin’s gun: the HK MK 23 . The USP  is the newer civilian version, replacing the Mark 23. The MK23 is generally acknowledged as one of the most accurate handguns ever made, it’s damn near indestructable. It was adopted by USSOCOM in the 90s and I think I read somewhere a lot of SEALs carry it too.

The cute little green Walther .22 is a handgun I can actually shoot. The USP is tough for me to fire; my hands are small and the slide is stiff. Just loading the clip is tough for my little fingers.

The pearls in the pic were a gift the hubbins brought me from Turkey.

And I do have a dog, Hannah, sprawled there on my Scheherazade’s rug, also fromTurkey. Plus my robots and some of my religious collection. I love old religious art and icons and would have a houseful if I could afford it.

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13. When you’re stuck in a rut, how do you twist yourself out of it?

I don’t get stuck very often because I plot. I write a log line for my idea and run it by several people until I’m confident it’s compelling, plus I write jacket copy. Then I write a fairly detailed synopsis, say 2-3 single-spaced pages, and I write from that.
I also find sitting two characters down and letting them argue it out solves a lot of problems.

When all else fails, I vacuum. That gets my ass back in the chair pretty quick.

14.   What is your favorite electronic or digital writing tool?

My laptop in one of the comfy leather chairs in my office is my favorite spot. Also I’ve written a little on the iPad. I’m reading a forthcoming project and making notes for editing on the iPad right now.

15.   What is your favorite non-electronic writing tool?

My story bibles are 8×10 unlined moleskins. I’m a long time artist (used to be a pro) and doodler and they are filled with notes, clippings from magazines, reviews, and drawings. Sometimes I draw pictures and color them in. It gives me time to think. I think a lot during the day.

16.   What is the most persistent distraction from writing?

I write an epic online story with a friend involving all our characters from both our books. We just threw them all together to see what they do, like fanfic of our own books. It’s loads of fun and 100% creative because it’ll never be seen by anyone else. My character Saxen, who figures prominently in the second Sentinel book and is in a recent clip featured at Sex Scenes, was born there. http://www.betsydornbusch.com/2012/04/wolf-fight.html#more

17.   What is your ideal writing environment? Have you ever been able to create it?

My ideal environment comes from within.

Ha! I just threw up a little in my mouth. How pretentious is that? I have writer buddies who’ll slap me upside the head next time we hang at a convention bar.

But seriously, I get settled in the story and eager to find out what happens next; more eager than any other thing in my life. That’s writing Heaven for me. Doesn’t matter where I sit; I’ve written books at my kitchen table with my baby daughter playing at my feet, poolside in Jamaica, airplanes, bed, outside on my back patio, in bars. I called bullshit on the “perfect environment” for myself a long time ago. It’d just be another excuse.

Interestingly, I just had a conversation with a friend about writing in hotel rooms. We have a full schedule of cons this year and are also both on tight deadlines. We both recently bought wireless keyboards for our iPads, which work great going through airport security and are so much easier to deal with than laptops. When I’m in England later in the summer I plan on getting up in the mornings to write each day. We’ll see. It’s interesting to note that at the conference I was just at, I heard Robert Crais, Jeff Deaver, and Kevin Anderson all disappeared up to their rooms to write.

18.   What social media do you use? Do you combine your personal and professional or keep them separate?

Mostly Facebook and my blog, but my agent is big on Twitter so I’m getting sucked in. I’m on Google+ too, mostly for the erotica crowd. Oh, and Goodreads.

I had an anonymous online persona for a number of years. My cover got blown when I started selling stories, and then my picture appeared in Locus a few years ago. Now my public persona has taken over the personal online. I’m a longtime punk rock fan and one of my friends just told me the punk look ages well. I choose to believe her, so I’m pretty much a rock star all the time now. (Favorite hotel: Hard Rock Hotel.) I take the view that I’m an entertainer and my job is to be entertaining as a person and as a writer. That said, when I’m at home writing or hanging with my good friends…not so much rock star. More mommy or drinking buddy, preferably in my jammies.

19.   What is your editing/rewrite process?

I revise the previous day’s work before throwing down new words. By the time I finish a book, I can’t really call it a first draft because I’ve been doing rolling revisions the whole time. I hate writing balls-to-the-wall without stopping and massive rewrites drive me mad. Since I work with editors and my agent now, plus my critique groups, I have a lot of good help along the way. For instance, LOST PRINCE was drafted, I re-read it once, and turned it in. Any mistakes belong to my editor, lol. Nah, he was fabulous and really made it a better book.

20.   Who shot first, Han or Greedo?

Duh. Han.

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Free At Last!

Thank God Almighty, I’m Free At Last!

Yesterday was my first free Tuesday in months. I’m done teaching for the semester, and probably won’t teach again until next Spring. I like that schedule… it keeps my hand in the professional teaching realm, but leaves me with most of my year to dedicate to writing.

I’ve felt incredibly productive this past week! Well, not in terms of dishes or laundry, but I’ve been able to do a lot more writing-related stuff. I made a rough outline of a series of five books that are Christian faith stories with a GLBT theme. The first story used to be called “Mascots” but it is now “The Sojourner’s Guide to the Galaxy.”

Making progress on the goals:

  • Do something writing-related six days a week. Yup! Easy Peasy.
  • Do a #1k1hr at least 3 times a week. Er… yes to the equivalent of…
  • Finish a short story for the Calliope Mall anthology. Done and shared, ready to revise and edit.
  • Read through and critique a story Geri sent me weeks (months?) ago, as well as the newer one she just sent. Not yet… hopefully in the next couple of days.
  • Read through, scrutinize, and outline the script for the upcoming Star Trek: Phase II shoot.  I’ll be working on continuity this time around, so I need to be intimately familiar with every scene. (No, I didn’t write it.) The shoot happens just after this ROW80 round ends. Not yet. But this one can wait a couple of weeks. 
  • Instead of immediately diving into “The Story” that will be submitted to an agent, since I’ve been out of it for several months (only writing my serial short and the occasional side project) I will first re-write one of the others, probably Under the Radar, as a warm-up to get back into the world of Kingdom Come. Sort-of… actually, I ended up going back to a different WIP about the Pangalactic Sojourners.
  • Look at all the stories I’ve begun and decide just how long to leave each on the shelf. I love my Steampunk Mermaid story, but there are other things I’d like to finish first. Not yet. I might actually leave this for the very end of the round, after I see what I actually tie-off and finish in the next few weeks.
  • Use this round to tie up or discard loose ends, and look towards the next round to churning out the rough draft for the novel I’d like to submit to an agent. So far so good. In fact, I’ve been incredibly productive, finishing off various writing-related tasks.
  • Sometimes I forget to list the regular blog stuff as goals, but it’s all still there. My serial short every Monday, SciFi Question of the Day every Tuesday, update for ROW80 every Wednesday, and I frequently link-up with Write On Edge on Fridays. Yup! Still good on this front.
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SciFi Q of the Day: Channel the Genre Trope

SciFi Question of the Day: If you were in an Indiana Jones or Tombraider type scenario, faced with a long mysterious hallway you must traverse to get to the treasure, and the instructions on your treasure map said “Channel the genre trope,” what would you do?

Facebook Answers:

  Dave Mac Have the lady sing Lolita, setting off the traps on the path before me….

  Gwendolyn Wilkins Look for the remote ;P

  Brian Covault Tell my sidekick to go first.

  James Lucius Let’s see – that usually means darts or arrows from knee to shoulder level. So a slow prone-crawl down the hallway, (in case it’s a pressure activated spear trap instead), seems in order.

Google Plus Answers:

  Steven Garone  You run as fast as you can and shoot your guns into the void.

  Jason Fisk  Run like my arse is on fire. Or, send the guide in first to see if it really is dangerous.

  Moe Tousignant  Duck because I just set off a trap.

  Brittany Constable  Toss my hat down the hallway and somersault after it.

  Anthony Deaver  First thing I’d do is get a new map.

  AmyBeth Inverness  +Anthony Deaver You can get one in the gift shop on the way out, but you have to get through the mysterious hallway first.

Post Script:

This question was directly inspired by Michael R. Underwood‘s new book Geekomancy, which is coming out in July. I had pleasure of interviewing Michael last week. Question #4 tells us how to properly channel a genre trope. 🙂

I would love to hear what you think! Even if you are reading this post a year or more after publishing, I hope you will leave a comment with your own ideas on this topic.

The previous SciFi Q of the Day is Junkyard Wars

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The next SciFi Q of the Day is Time Traveler’s Naivete.

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Interview With Michael R Underwood

Michael R. Underwood grew up devouring stories in all forms to learn and prepare for a career as an author. He holds a B.A. in Creative Mythology and East Asian Studies from Indiana University and an M.A. in Folklore Studies from the University of Oregon, which have been great preparation for writing speculative fiction. Michael went straight from his M.A. to the Clarion West Writers Workshop and then landed in Bloomington, Indiana, where he remains. When not writing or selling books across the Midwest as an independent book representative, Michael dances Argentine Tango and studies renaissance martial arts.

Geekomancy, Michael’s debut novel, is an urban fantasy inspired by Buffy the Vampire SlayerClerksThe Dresden Files, and The Middleman.  Geekomancy will be available as an eBook original from Pocket Books on July 10th, 2012.  You can reach him @MikeRUnderwood on Twitter or at http://www.geektheory.wordpress.com

1.     Have you ever found a gym with greatsword training as part of their available services?

None that I’ve attended, though Forteza Fitness in Chicago seems like they might be the first.  Given the chance, I’d strongly lean towards the historical combat/classes/workshop kind of model – right now, the gym I visit serves only the ‘has the devices I use’ function, where I think a place like Forteza would be the kind of place I’d hang out more informally and make friends.

Right now, my greatsword gym is my backyard, since I want to train up the skills I picked up in a workshop last week.  There is a 99.9% chance that the greatsword material will end up in a future novel, it’s just too much fun.

2.     What was your job description as a fiction reader for Fantasy Magazine?

We all had access to an email account which received the submissions, and the fiction readers would go in, mark stories with their personal icons to say ‘I’m reading this, don’t bother’ so that we didn’t step on one another’s toes. When I marked a story, I opened it up and read very critically, setting my expectations high, like if I were an only-vaguely interested reader.  The stories I passed along to the fiction editor for consideration were the ones that grabbed me right away or were so strong in their concept or prose that I never had the chance to lose interest.

3.     Did you coin the term Geekomancy?

I made the term up, though I discovered after I got deep into the first draft with that name and title that the Dresden Files role-playing game also coins geekomancy in a throw-away comment in the margins.

I give a fair bit of credit to the Unknown Armies role-playing game, which had such schools of magic as Dipsomancy, Personamancy, Plutomancy, and so on, for serving as inspiration to look beyond the normal range of magical schools. I tried to avoid the specific styles they reference, and make sure I had a different interpretation/method anytime I did something remotely close to a style the game had already done.

4.     How does one channel a genre trope?

Since it would be mean to say ‘You’ll just have to wait and read Geekomancy to find out!’ here we go:

Channeling a genre is a matter of focus and will, like many magic systems in fiction and among various traditions in our own world. First, you have to immerse yourself in a media property which shows the genre trope or conventions you want.  You could watch Die Hard to get the ‘long-suffering but determined and unstoppable action hero’ power or put on the recent BBC Sherlock to copy the title charcter’s hyper-analytical skills. But channeling a genre isn’t just about watching and copying, it requires an individual emotional connection to the material. Ree, my hero, can’t emulate a genre she doesn’t love, can’t use magic from a TV show or movie she isn’t passionate about.

Once you’ve built up enough of that synergetic connection between passion and exposure, the magic takes up a place in your mind, which Ree experiences as a buzzing energy. But once you’ve made the connection, it will change your perception of the world.  Channel Sherlock and you can’t help but see the way he does, right down to not understanding emotions, channel The Princess Bride and you’ll find your dialogue comes out all William Goldman-y unless you very consciously work against the magical influence.  You get some of the bad with the good, so it takes experience and willpower to find the right balance to achieve what you want.

In short: Exposure to the material + Passion for the material, focused by will = Magic.

5.     What’s the difference between a geek and a nerd? Do you identify as either?

It’s really hard for me to have this conversation anymore, because the terms have become so blurred.  Some folks draw strict lines between the terms/communities, others use them interchangeably, and sometimes, it just comes down to what sounds better when used as a label.

Generally speaking, I think of geeks as people passionate about something in the SF/F pop culture world, and nerds are people who are passionate about something in academic fields. But this distinction falls down very quickly for many people.

I identify more as a geek than a nerd, but I won’t get angry if someone calls me a nerd, as long as they don’t mean it in a derogatory fashion.  If you use a label to condemn or intentionally exclude someone from notice, worth, or consideration, whatever the label, then I get uppity.

6.     Do you identify with any of the characters on The Big Bang Theory or The Guild?

In The Big Bang Theory, I’d identify most with Leonard, but only just.  I’m not at all on the physical science side of the geek/nerd world, since I’m a humanities/social sciences guy.  And the last time I was as consistently inept around women was when I was in undergrad, about ten years ago.  I think the model of geek/nerd as shown in The Big Bang Theory is largely outdated in terms of being a representation of what ‘most geeks/nerds are like’.

As far as The Guild, those characters are just as exaggerated as in The Big Bang Theory, just with different archetypes.  If I had to pick, I’d be a Codex – sometimes insecure, but trying to bring people together to find meaning outside just that which the game itself yields.

Thanks Michael for being such a great sport about me including this video in your interview lol! .

7.     Do you ever Google yourself? Has anyone confused you with a different Michael Underwood?

I commit self-Googling, certainly, especially after I got my book deal.  When I was still an aspiring newbie, I knew that I’d need to use my middle initial or a pen name when I got published, so I wouldn’t get confused with other Michael Underwoods.

There was a mystery writer Michael Underwood who was fairly prolific in the 1970s, so I didn’t want to have confusion in author/title searches.  Add that to the various doctors and the Michael Underwood who is a British television personality, and I’ve got a lot of competition.  Specificity makes search engines happy, so it was middle initial to the rescue.  Luckily, I got that figured out even before my short fiction started selling, so it’s all under one name.

8.     What is line editing? Is that something the author does, or the editor?

Luckily, the name is pretty instructive – line edits are changes on the line level, aka the sentence level. They include things like ‘This phrase is awkward’ or ‘You’ve used the word cable four times in this paragraph, we need to change it up.’

Line edits are done by the editor, but then approved and executed by the author. I get a version of the novel with Adam’s comments in-line and as sidebars, where he’ll suggest grammatical changes, word choice changes, and add in any questions or comments he has about small-level issues.  I go through the document and if I see a change he’s made that I disagree with, I change it back or type in a different phrasing/way of resolving the issue.  Line edits combine with copy edits for the 1-2 punch that takes a novel from ‘good’ to ‘great’ in terms of polish.

9.     What will your novel go through before it comes out later this year?

After line edits, the manuscript will go to a copy editor, who will correct grammatical issues, typos, and such. Some copy editors also help with continuity work, correcting things like ‘This character has green eyes in one scene and blue eyes in another’ or ‘this book happens over five days, starting on a Thursday, but the end of the novel somehow happens on a Friday.  I’ve changed the dates for continuity based on the first day given’ and so on.

After that, the book will be typeset for production (into the various eBook formats).  Then my editor and I will get First Pass Pages, making sure that nothing crazy happened between the copy edit and the typesetting (as he explained it to me).  If all is well there, we approve the FPPs and the publisher finishes producing the final eBook that will be available to readers on the release date (July 10th!)

There’s also promotions work that happens between now and then, but that’s a different part of the business.

10.  Were any changes suggested to Geekomancy that you that you were reluctant to make?

Happily, no.  Adam and my vision about what makes Geekomancy appealing are entirely in line.  All of the suggestions he made were ways to strengthen what I was already doing, and nothing called for has rankled my aesthetic.  Adam is great about respecting my artistic vision; he helps me make sure the book is representing itself as effectively as possible in terms of clarity, character, and plot.

11.  What was your path to publication?

Geekomancy was not ‘supposed’ to be my first novel sale. It wasn’t even the novel I was ‘supposed’ to be writing.  I was working on a YA Epic Fantasy novel (which I will be getting back to, because it is awesome) in the fall of 2010, and over Thanksgiving weekend, I was staying with my girlfriend while she worked on papers for grad school. I decided to take a little vacation in my writing, and gave myself the weekend off from what I was ‘supposed’ to be doing to play with this weird ‘geekomancy’ idea.  At that time, it was known as ‘Distraction: The Novel’, but after a couple of days and about five thousand words of material, I couldn’t stop.

A little over a year later, I’d finished the first draft and done some revisions, so I decided to post the novel on Book Country (www.bookcountry.com — an online writing community for discussion and workshopping).  But since the site is run by a subsidiary company of Penguin Group, the folks who run Book Country had the connections to reach out to editors and agents, who are invited to the site as a way of finding new talent.

When I uploaded Geekomancy, I was just intending to show my revisions as I tried to prepare the novel for publication.  But one day, I got an email from Adam Wilson, who introduced himself as an editor for Pocket/Gallery, said he’d read my Geekomancy excerpt on Book Country, and wanted to read the whole manuscript.

Cue excited freak out (!) I sent the manuscript, along with a note saying that it was still deep in revisions, and wasn’t anywhere near polished.  Adam wanted to read it anyway, and a little over a week later, he contacted me again and asked to schedule a phone call, where he offered to buy the book and up to two sequels.

12.  What do you refer to as your “real” project?

Along the way, I thought of each novel as my first ‘real’ project.  Looking back now, the first novel that had a chance of being sold was Shield & Crocus, which combines the New Weird (ala Perdido Street StationThe Etched City or Finch) and the superhero genre (ala revisionist stories like Astro CityInvincible).  It was the first novel I sent out to agents and editors, and it got a lot of positive feedback despite not being sold (yet.)  I’d like to do something with it someday, but right now, the Geekomancy series is keeping me plenty busy.

13.  Do you have any “stories in the back of the proverbial drawer that will never see the light of day?”

Sure, lots.  I think most writers do.  Every one of the stories I wrote during undergrad are in that category.  They were the result of my efforts to figuring out the craft, learning the basic skills and developing my abilities, so I don’t regret the time I spent on them.  On the other hand, I wouldn’t ever publish them out or ask people to pay for them.

14.  What social media do you use? Do you combine your personal and professional or keep them separate?

I’m active on Twitter, Facebook, Goodreads, and to a lesser extent, Google+.  I also run the Facebook page for my day job, which is easy to keep separate, since they’re distinct accounts.  When I speak in my social media faces, I’m 99% of the time speaking as myself, not claiming to be speaking for my job. If I’m talking up a book from one of my publishers, I try to disclose that so people know where I’m coming from.

In terms of personal/professional as a writer, I tend to follow the approach that my friends and my readers are likely to want to know my other thoughts about the world – what movies I like, what happens as I’m traveling, and so on.  Since my first novel series is deeply tied into pop culture, I view posts about movies, tv, and the like as immediately relevant to my writing identity. Truly personal material just doesn’t end up on social media sites.

15.   What is your favorite electronic or digital writing tool?

I’ve used Word for writing since undergrad, though when I wrote Geekomancy, I was trying out the Scrivener for Windows beta, and now that it is released, I bought a license and will keep using it for novel projects to help me stay organized, especially with the Geekomancy sequel, where I need to keep track of established characters.

16.  What is your favorite non-electronic writing tool?

A notebook.  I have a few notebooks strewn about in my apartment and various traveling bags, where I’ll jot down little ideas I can’t immediately connect to another project.

17.  What is the most persistent distraction from writing?

In my free time, the biggest distraction is just the siren song of the internet and its multiplicitous glorious-time-wasters.  I have other hobbies and passions, but those help keep me healthy and excited about life, in addition to giving me cool things to write about (see #18).

18.  Which is more useful to a person who wants to write fiction for a living, a degree in creative writing, or a degree in whatever subject the writer finds interesting?

I can only speak to my own experiences, and I was kind of a hybrid.  My Creative Mythology degree included a lot of creative writing classes, but I also earned a B.A. in East Asian Studies and my M.A. is in Folklore Studies.  I think that it’s really important to develop your craft skills, and writing classes/degrees can give you the time and the structure to do that, but I think it’s really important (for SF/F writers at least, and for all writers more broadly) to cultivate passions outside of writing which you can bring to your work, as color, setting, or as forces that shape your worldview and contribute to your individual voice.

If all fiction writers only ever read the same canonical texts and all studied the same curriculum of literature, craft, and workshopping classes, I think we’d have a much narrower range of fiction in the world.  Embrace your weird interests, and then reap the rewards of your specialized knowledge by bringing it to your work.

Chealsie Hightower dancing with fellow Dancing With the Stars Pro Mark Ballas, whom I am sure gets mistaken for Mike Underwood all the time.

19.  If you were to be a competitor on Dancing With the Stars, which pro dancer would you like to have as a partner?

Probably Chelsie Hightower – I watched her on So You Think You Can Dance, so I’d feel most comfortable working with her since I ‘know’ her better than the other pros. She’s also not taller than me (even in heels), which is a plus.

However, I think I might get disqualified from being on Dancing With The Stars, since I’ve studied ballroom dance and spent several years dancing Argentine Tango pretty intensively.  But if they let me sneak on (or more accurately, if they thought I’d bring in viewers and decided to invite me), I think my skills might make up for my lack of relative fame.  Then again, I might throw the choreography out the window and dance improvisationally one night, overpowered by the ecstatic glory of the dance.  That’d make good television, I bet.

20.  Who shot first, Han or Greedo?

For me, if Han doesn’t shoot first, his character arc in A New Hope is worthless.  When we meet Han, he’s a seedy character who looks like he’s going to swindle Luke and Obi-Wan. He’s a not-terribly-reassuring only option for the desperate pair. He has a dangerous buddy and we don’t know what he’s going to do.  Shooting Greedo first fully establishes Han as a grey character, not a Good Guy.  Until the very end, Han is consistently motivated by greed and self-interest.  If you have Greedo shoot first, you never fully get to establish Han as 1) a badass and 2) a shady not-so-trustworthy guy.  Without setting him up to change from selfish to selfless, you rob the character of a rewarding arc.

At least, that’s how I see it.

Attention writers: Michael has donated a critique to Kat Brauer’s Crits for Water Fundraiser! It is a great cause. Click the Crits for Water link for more information. This raffle is open for entries until 11:59pm, Eastern Daylight Time, May 6th, 2012.

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Done for the Semester

Hallelujah!

I’ve turned in the final grades for my class, which means I am done for the semester!

I love teaching. I’ve missed it in the 4 1/2 years since my baby was born. If you can’t tell from the pictures, I teach computers. Specifically Spreadsheets and Databases. I’ll probably teach again next Spring, which means I’ll have the summer and fall to do other stuff.

Like WRITE!

…and edit.

…and polish.

…and finally send that query letter out!

Last week I listed some of my thoughts regarding the goals for this Round of Words in 80 Days. I knew when this round began that I was going to have to do less writing until the semester was over, but then I would jump into the round when the semester ended.

My goals for the remainder of this round:

  • Do something writing-related six days a week.
  • Do a #1k1hr at least 3 times a week.
  • Finish a short story for the Calliope Mall anthology.
  • Read through and critique a story Geri sent me weeks (months?) ago, as well as the newer one she just sent.
  • Read through, scrutinize, and outline the script for the upcoming Star Trek: Phase II shoot.  I’ll be working on continuity this time around, so I need to be intimately familiar with every scene. (No, I didn’t write it.) The shoot happens just after this ROW80 round ends.
  • Instead of immediately diving into “The Story” that will be submitted to an agent, since I’ve been out of it for several months (only writing my serial short and the occasional side project) I will first re-write one of the others, probably Under the Radar, as a warm-up to get back into the world of Kingdom Come.
  • Look at all the stories I’ve begun and decide just how long to leave each on the shelf. I love my Steampunk Mermaid story, but there are other things I’d like to finish first.
  • Use this round to tie up or discard loose ends, and look towards the next round to churning out the rough draft for the novel I’d like to submit to an agent.
  • Sometimes I forget to list the regular blog stuff as goals, but it’s all still there. My serial short every Monday, SciFi Question of the Day every Tuesday, update for ROW80 every Wednesday, and I frequently link-up with Write On Edge on Fridays.

One more thing…

Happy release day Tiffany Reisz!

The Siren is out in e-book now, and will be out in print in a few months.

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SciFi Q of the Day: Junkyard Wars

SciFi Question of the Day: You’re putting together your team for Junkyard Wars. You get 1 Mythbuster, 1 Superhero, 1 Facebook Friend, and 1 Starfleet officer. Who’s on your team?

Facebook Answers:

  Tyler Gurdak Grant. Tony Stark. Troy Mills. Geordi LaForge.

  Ethan Clews Kari, The Human Torch, Chris Achilles, Scotty

  AmyBeth Fredricksen Interesting to see who picks Geordi, who picks Scotty, and who picks someone else… I wonder if they’d be handicapped having to make due with what’s available in a 21st century junkyard?

  Charles Root Jr Grant, Frank Richards, James Cawley, Ezri Dax (Frank to do all the work, Grant so he can fanboy Frank, James cause he’d think it was cool and Ezri to stare at in a bikini)

  AmyBeth Fredricksen Why do you have to wear a bikini to stare at Ezri?

  Linda Foley Falvo Are you picking on Charles? LOL

  Matt Nusbaum Jamie, Tony Stark, Data, my buddy Mike.

  Robert B. Fredricksen Jamie, Tony Stark, Data, and Spock!

  AmyBeth Fredricksen Who’s on your facebook list? Data or Spock?

  Robert B. Fredricksen I have liked Leonard Nimoy, Spock, and have friended Brent Spiner, and Data Soong! I think I’m covered!

Google Plus Answers:

  Charles Moore  Jamie Hyneman, Reed Richards or Forge, John DeLuca, Geordi.

  David J. Agostine  Jamie (less annoying), Superman (carry stuff, and use x-ray vision to find crap we need) My friend Greg (who builds race cars) Montgomery Scott (no brainier) – I will lead us to victory over the guy with Geordi on his team.. lol.

  Tiffany Marshall  Grant, Superman for his welding powers (or Magneto if supervillains are permitted, just because that would be hilarious!), my husband’s best friend (mechanic skills), and Data.

  AmyBeth Inverness  I should’ve said G+ friend, but you get the gist lol!

  Tiffany Marshall  This is the most fun question I’ve had in a long, long time!

  Laston Kirkland  I want the walrus guy from mythbuster.. the stretchy guy from the fantastic four… I’ll take Mike from facebook (he knows who he is) and Data. ’cause hey… androids are handy.

  James Drury  data for sure.

  Christopher Clark  Grant from MythBusters (only MythBuster with a PHD) Tony Stark (he built a hand sized Fusion reactor while living in a cave with junk his captors gave him) I don’t have a facebook and 7of9 from voyager (because we can’t ALL have Data.

  Christopher Clark  So who wins?

  AmyBeth Inverness  Still open to debate…

  Christopher Clark  Only one debating, so I claim victory

  AmyBeth Inverness  Works for me.

I would love to hear what you think! Even if you are reading this post a year or more after publishing, I hope you will leave a comment with your own ideas on this topic.

The previous SciFi Q of the Day is Brain in a Bell Jar

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The next SciFi Q of the Day will is Channeling the Genre Trope.

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In a Position to Give Advice

I’ve had several people ask me about “How do you write a book and get published?” over the last few months. At first, I felt like I was a pretender, someone who had no right to give advice. After all, I’m “pre-published” which is a nice way of saying “wannabe.”

Then I realized that I really do have something to offer. Not only do I have a short story coming out later this year, but I’ve spent the last year and a half actively pursuing the advice I found about becoming a successful writer. So, yes, I do have something to share. I hope this can help someone else who is diving into this world for the first time.

What I’ve learned in the past 18 months about How to write and publish a book:

  1. Anyone can type “I lik to weed and rite good story now u bye it ok?” and upload it to Smashwords or another self-publishing site. They might offer the book for free, or charge a wide range of prices. When a READER goes to Smashwords or one of these other sites, they know up front that they will find a mix of terrible, horrible writing, as well as some incredibly fascinating and well-written work. It is pot-luck… a real treasure hunt.
  2. Although the world of publishing is changing rapidly, writers still write, agents still represent, editors still edit, and publishers still publish. The traditionalway to get published is to write something good, then edit/proofread/polish it until it is the best it can be, then send queries to agents until one says “I’d like to represent you.” Then it is the agent’s job to sell the book to a publisher.
  3. Many, but not most (and certainly not the “big” ones) publishers will accept submissions directly from writers without agents.
  4. Agents have very specific guidelines about what they will represent. Do not send a vampire vs zombie story to an agent who only represents Amish romance. There are a couple of sources (my favorite is the Writer’s Market) to find out what agents are looking for. I went through page after page to find an agent who would represent romance and erotica and non-heterosexual relationships and science fiction. There weren’t many. Not only do you need to find an agent who represents what you write, but then you need to follow the agent/agency’s guidelines regarding how to submit. Once upon a time this meant mailing something to an agent. These days, many accept/insist on the query being an e-mail. Some specify “No attachments.” Anyway, read carefully exactly how they want you to send a query, then do exactly that.
  5. There are several things a writer will be expected to do even long before they ever finish their first rough draft. The main thing is to establish a web presence. For most, that means a blog and/or a website. It is a good idea for writers to network with people (readers, other writers, and just plain people) via social media such as twitter, facebook, G+, LinkedIn, and others. But you don’t need to do it all. Do what feels right for you. Go ahead and pay the $12 – $20 it costs to get yourname dot com. If you like twitter, tweet. If you like facebook, share.
  6. The only thing worse than having no blog is having an abandoned blog. If an agent or publisher sees that a writer got really enthusiastic one day and started publishing a million blog posts, then later got sick of it and stopped, that’s a huge red flag. Decide how much you can blog, and keep it up. Some only blog once a week. The average I’ve found is three times a week. Saying you’ll do it every day is usually a recipe for disaster.
  7. Make friends with other writers. In my experience, this is easiest on twitter. Be supportive. Say “Congratulations!” when someone says they’ve sold something, or it’s their release day, or they just got to see their book’s cover for the first time. Re-tweet announcements for people. Do NOT just advertise either yourself or others. You need to engage people and be real, not a spammer.
  8. Write as much as you can, even if it’s crap. Some writers can only set aside an hour a day several times a week, and write less than a thousand words each time. Others are more prolific. But there is value in getting the words out of you, even if you feel like what’s coming out is crap. For one thing, you need to get the crap out of you before the good stuff will come. (Just look at my blog… I’ve got both gems and crap side by side lol!) For another thing, you might very well discover that what you’ve written isn’t as crappy as you thought, and with some polish it can be pretty darn good.
  9. Embrace the editing process. Realize that only the miracle-workers churn out perfect results the first time through, and half the people that claim to are lying. Most stories that end up being published by a reputable house go through 6-12 or even more rounds of editing. Sometimes this means a re-write. Sometimes this means the proofreader caught some typos.
  10. Stop thinking about your manuscript as your baby, and see it as your grown child who needs to grow up, go get a job and start supporting itself. There might be scenes that you absolutely love… maybe they really happened and you feel it would be dishonest to leave them out, maybe they’re incredibly poignant or funny or passionate… but if the scene isn’t important to the overall story, out it goes. Your manuscript is a commodity that will (hopefully) be bought and sold. It needs to be the best it can be.
  11. Besides establishing a web presence, there are other things a writer can do that will help their career, or at least improve their skills. You can proofread, either for an actual publisher, or for other writers. Offer to Beta-read. Read books that you enjoy, especially those similar to what you write. Read books about writing. Don’t worry too much about all the “Do not do this ____” advice you’ll find. There are exceptions to every rule. Find writing communities and immerse yourself. I like linking up with Write On Edge with a short prompt every week. I also keep up with A Round of Words in 80 Days. Every November I do NaNoWriMo. I’m sure there are hundreds of others… find what you like and dive in. Don’t overcommit, just find what works for you.
  12. Understand that most writers have day jobs, even the so-called successful ones. Becoming a published author won’t make you a celebrity or pay all your bills. This is something to aspire to… it can happen. But don’t think that just because someone out there bought something you wrote means the journey is over. Indeed, it has only just begun.

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Almost Done

One week to go!

I’m glad I went back to teaching this semester. It’s a job I really enjoy. But the first semester back always takes ten times the effort as I had to adapt to new software that the school is now using for their online content, a new version of the software I was teaching, a small adjustment in the course content etc.

Next week I give my students their final exams, and then I’m done for the summer.

Another thing I’m giving up is my proofreading. I’ve enjoyed doing it, and I have learned a lot from the experience. It was a good investment of one year. That year is actually up in the middle of May, and I do intend to make sure it was a full year.

I am clearing up as many time commitments as I can so that I can concentrate on polishing a full length novel and prepare to send a query to an agent.

Ah… the agent! I went through the Writers’ Guide last year and searched out agents who represent SciFi and Romance and stories that have non-heterosexual relationships. There weren’t many. In fact, one stood out far above the crowd (Is three a crowd?) After checking out the agency’s website and connecting with agents and writers via social media, my supposed “list” of agents had one shining example at the top. What I hope to do is, instead of the usual query-in-the-slush-pile, I will look for an opportunity where the agent is doing a seminar or offering a critique (agents donate critiques to charitable causes all the time) so that I know that I will at least get some feedback beyond “No thank-you” if she doesn’t want me and my story. One thing I’ve learned in the last 18 months is that agents sometimes say “no” even if they do like the story. They might already represent an author who is very similar, or simply not have room in their schedule for another author at story at all. I’m patient, and I’m willing to completely re-write the novel several times over.

So what about my ROW80 goals? I won’t actually set them down until next week, but here’s what I’m thinking…

  • Finish a short story about a character who finds his way into a magical shopping mall for an anthology a friend is putting together. It might not be actually published in any way, it’s just for fun, but I want to participate.
  • Read through and critique a story Geri sent me weeks (months?) ago but I haven’t had time to get to. I want to give it a real crit, not just a quick proofreading pass.
  • Read through, scrutinize, and outline the script for the upcoming Star Trek: Phase II shoot.  I’ll be working on continuity this time around, so I need to be intimately familiar with every scene. (No, I didn’t write it.) The shoot happens just after this ROW80 round ends.
  • Instead of immediately diving into “The Story” that will be submitted to an agent, since I’ve been out of it for several months (only writing my serial short and the occasional side project) I will first re-write one of the others, probably Under the Radar, as a warm-up to get back into the world of Kingdom Come.
  • Sometimes I forget to list the regular blog stuff as goals, but it’s all still there. SciFi Question of the Day every Tuesday, my serial short every Monday, update for ROW80 every Wednesday, and I frequently link-up with Write On Edge on Fridays.

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SciFi Q of the Day: Brain in a Bell Jar

I commission “Brain in a Bell Jar” and this is what I get?

SciFi Question of the Day: If one condition of advancement was to share an office with your predecessor’s still-living and communicating brain encased in a bell jar, would you accept the promotion?

Facebook Answers

  Daniel Beard it depends, do they get to do my performance review?

  AmyBeth Fredricksen Yes.

  Brian Covault Is it likely pre-decessor who I’m replacing and will be doing my performance review is not happy that I’m replacing them?

  AmyBeth Fredricksen Nah… he died of bacon-overdose. Totally his own fault. But his contract says that his brain gets to remain involved in the company for “the foreseeable future.”

  Daniel Beard ok, so no tapping on the jar. yeah, probably.

  Jim Smith You scare me.

  Brian Covault On the plus side, your new co-worker would make a good conversation piece.

  Pony Horton Only if he was Hans Delbrück, scientist and saint.

   James Lucius Hook his feed up to a computer and feed him a manufactured reality. He’d be out of your hair and never figure it out. (With credit to cartoonist Ruben Bolling for the idea!)

  AmyBeth Fredricksen ‎…and the TNG episode where they did that to Moriarty…

  Gaul Stone Only one jar for the bosses brain and my prized collection of zombie brain eating piranhas – oh well i’m sure they will get along together swimmingly 😛

Google Plus Answers

  Brent Stires  substantial advancement?

  James Drury  only if I could eat it with my nachos.

  James Stanley  Heck yeah.

  Tiffany Marshall  Is there a pay increase?

  Becky Cox  Hum…. I kinda like my space sometimes, but probably would accept the promo, just bring along earplugs.

  AmyBeth Inverness  More power/responsibility/prestige and… yes… more pay. But the brain likes to listen to 1900’s show tunes…

  Tiffany Marshall  I’m fine with the brain in my office as long as I get at least a 10% pay raise. It’s better than having the opposite (sharing the office with a brainless body.)

  Andy Brokaw  Did I like the person before they died? Because I think that might make a difference.

  David Foster  Can I put some goldfish in with the brain?

In RL, that wouldn’t actually bother me, unless the guy was a jerk.

  AmyBeth Inverness  +Andy Brokaw : Well, in the short story I’m writing, the brain in the jar is George Senior, who founded the Intergalactic Meat empire. The guy who has to share an office with the brain is his son, George Junior.

  Andy Brokaw  I love my dad and all, but I don’t think I’d want to share an office with him regardless of whether he had a body or not.

  Christopher Clark  do the Jars have a volume control Nob? am i required to take their input? is it just the one jar or a collection of everyone who had the job Before me?

when i die can i choose to have my Brain sent to my family?

  AmyBeth Inverness  Yes, they have a volume control, but the brain controls it.

  Christopher Clark  deal breaker, i look for a different job

  AmyBeth Inverness  ‎…and on a related note…

SciFi Question of the Day follow-up: What substance could be used as a preservative, but is poisonous to humans?

  Becky Cox  Formaldehyde?…

  Christopher Clark  everything in high enough concentration would be Poisonous. Arsenic is used to preserve wood. Lye is used in Lutefisk, that nordic fish.

  AmyBeth Inverness  I went with Arsenic. http://underlochandkey.amybethinverness.com/2012/04/18/intergalactic-bacon/

I would love to hear what you think! Even if you are reading this post a year or more after publishing, I hope you will leave a comment with your own ideas on this topic.

The previous SciFi Q of the Day is Nirgal Vallis

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The next SciFi Q of the Day is Junkyard Wars

The story this post is about is up on the fiction side of my blog. It’s called Intergalactic Bacon.

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